List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list, and I prefer to use my phone for it." Also, avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer natural and concise.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, and I prefer to use my phone for it because it's convenient and easy to update.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly, for example, "No, I don't usually make lists for work because I can remember my tasks for a couple of days." Also, use linking words to clarify your reasoning.

例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I can remember my tasks for a couple of days, so I don't find it necessary.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary, but others prefer it since it helps them remember things and avoid forgetting important items."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary, but others prefer it since it helps them remember things and avoid forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is unclear. Try to answer directly and use linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to use and I always carry it with me when I go out."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to use and I always carry it with me when I go out.

× Yes, I'm a call list, but I mostly use my phone for making a list.

✓ Yes, I call a list, but I mostly use my phone to make a list.

The phrase 'I'm a call list' is incorrect; it should be 'I call a list' to express the action. Also, 'for making a list' is better expressed as 'to make a list' to indicate purpose.

× So I do not make less to call my work be 'cause I remember my work only for two days.

✓ So I do not make lists for my work because I remember my work only for two days.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'be 'cause' should be 'because' for clarity.

× Mostly people like. Like to making a list because it this is an easy way to remember the list today.

✓ Most people like to make a list because it is an easy way to remember the list today.

The phrase 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like to make' as 'like' is followed by the base verb form. Also, 'Mostly people' should be 'Most people'.

× Don't forget anything which they want.

✓ They don't forget anything they want.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure. Reordering to 'They don't forget anything they want' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to making our list on my year.

✓ I prefer to make our list on my phone.

The phrase 'prefer to making' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make' as 'prefer to' is followed by the base verb form. Also, 'on my year' seems to be a typo and should be 'on my phone'.

× My phone because it because it is a carry it is easy to to use and I always carry my phone when I go outside.

✓ I prefer my phone because it is easy to use and I always carry it when I go outside.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Simplifying to 'I prefer my phone because it is easy to use and I always carry it when I go outside' improves clarity and grammar.