List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it time-consuming and cumbersome. I prefer to shop spontaneously and buy what I need at the moment.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích khi nào bạn làm danh sách và tại sao nó hữu ích, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prepare for unexpected events. It usually works well to keep me on track.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they are very busy. They prefer to manage their tasks in other ways that suit them better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy, và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and can remind me of important tasks. Using my phone saves time compared to writing on paper.

× No, I don't 'cause it's really is a time consuming cumbersome and I don't.

✓ No, I don't because it's really time-consuming and cumbersome, and I don't.

The phrase 'time consuming cumbersome' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' to correctly form a compound adjective. Also, 'it's really is' is redundant; only one verb 'is' is needed. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Another type person that is about to die to organize things when it's get times.

✓ I'm another type of person who likes to organize things when it's time.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like 'about to die to organize' and 'when it's get times'. The corrected sentence uses proper relative pronouns and verb forms to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I sometimes make a list for my work 'cause.

✓ I sometimes make a list for my work because.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'cause' which is a colloquial form of 'because'. It should be completed properly to maintain sentence structure.

× Sometime I need it to be fair for some British and also for some unexpected event.

✓ Sometimes I need it to be fair for some tasks and also for some unexpected events.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'British' is incorrect here; likely intended 'tasks' or 'duties'. 'Event' should be plural 'events' to match 'some'.

× Sometimes people don't like it because it's time consumed and also they don't have pretty much time 'cause they have a lot of work lot, so they need their birth data effectively.

✓ Sometimes people don't like it because it's time-consuming and also they don't have much time because they have a lot of work, so they need to manage their time effectively.

'Time consumed' should be 'time-consuming' (present participle adjective). 'Pretty much time' is incorrect; 'much time' is appropriate. 'Birth data' is incorrect; likely meant 'manage their time' or similar.

× Not my using in this way.

✓ I don't use it in this way.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a proper subject-verb-object structure.

× For me, Michael is on the paper is really time consuming, so I refer to my it's on my phone, my old phone, 'cause.

✓ For me, making lists on paper is really time-consuming, so I use my phone, my old phone, because

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'Michael is on the paper'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects verb forms.

× Is is honest and also is happy. O'clock to remind me when is a good time.

✓ It is convenient and also helps remind me when is a good time.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Is is honest and also is happy' is nonsensical. The correction provides a coherent sentence with proper subject and verb.