List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习使用完整句子，明确表达购物时列清单的好处，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me limit my purchases and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，影响理解。建议简洁明了地说明制作工作清单的作用，并使用连贯的句子。

例: Absolutely, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议用简单句表达观点，说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单，并举例支持。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and feels unnecessary, especially if they don't finish the tasks on the list.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，影响理解。建议清晰表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复和混乱的句子。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting, and I might get tempted to check social media, which wastes time.

× Yes, I always make some list too and I shot because it can.

✓ Yes, I always make some lists too and I jot because it can.

这里的list是可数名词，表示“清单”，应使用复数形式lists。

× Yes, I always make some list too and I shot because it can. Efficiently limit my. A limited the things I boards and I can just avoid some imposed purchases.

✓ Yes, I always make some lists too and I jot them down because it can efficiently limit the things I buy and I can just avoid some impulsive purchases.

原句结构混乱，句子不完整，需调整句子结构使其通顺，表达清晰。

× It always work because it's kind of is kind of calendar to me ends too.

✓ It always works because it's kind of like a calendar to me.

work作为动词，主语是it，第三人称单数，动词应加s变为works。calendar前应加冠词a。

× It always work because it's kind of is kind of calendar to me ends too.

✓ It always works because it's kind of like a calendar to me.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词work应加s变为works。

× If I follow this list, I can use everything's organized an efficiently so it helps me a lot.

✓ If I follow this list, I can keep everything organized and efficient, so it helps me a lot.

原句中use everything's organized an efficiently表达不正确，应改为keep everything organized and efficient。

× Maybe some people think that making list is we still time and nest unnecessary things.

✓ Maybe some people think that making lists wastes time and is unnecessary.

list是可数名词，应使用复数lists；waste是动词，主语making lists，第三人称单数，动词应加s。

× Maybe some people think that making list is we still time and nest unnecessary things.

✓ Maybe some people think that making lists wastes time and is unnecessary.

原句中we still time和nest unnecessary things表达错误，应改为wastes time and is unnecessary。

× For example they maybe they make a list I need to write a lot of things and ever since they didn't finish anything so they will fill this unnecessary.

✓ For example, maybe they make a list, need to write a lot of things, and since they don't finish anything, they will feel this is unnecessary.

list应为a list，动词时态和主谓一致需调整，fill应为feel，句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× For example they maybe they make a list I need to write a lot of things and ever since they didn't finish anything so they will fill this unnecessary.

✓ For example, maybe they make a list, need to write a lot of things, and since they don't finish anything, they will feel this is unnecessary.

原句中fill用错，应为feel，且句子中代词使用不当，需调整。

× Are preferred to make list on paper because if I make a list on phone I will is will destruct will lead to destruction and I will want to place a search social media.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because if I make a list on my phone, it will distract me and lead to destruction, and I will want to browse social media.

原句中prepositions使用错误，on phone应为on my phone，will is will destruct表达错误，应改为will distract me，place a search social media表达不当，应改为browse social media。

× Are preferred to make list on paper because if I make a list on phone I will is will destruct will lead to destruction and I will want to place a search social media.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because if I make a list on my phone, it will distract me and lead to destruction, and I will want to browse social media.

list应为复数lists，保持一致性。

× So is kind of waste of time and if you make list on paper it must be efficient.

✓ So it is kind of a waste of time, and if you make a list on paper, it must be efficient.

原句中缺少主语it，且list前应加冠词a。