List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。例えば、"No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously." のように答えると良いです。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で文法も誤っています。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な例を簡潔に述べましょう。例えば、"Yes, I make a list when I study English. It helps me organize my tasks and it works well." のように答えると良いです。

例: Yes, I make a list when I study English. It helps me organize my tasks and it works well.

提案: 意味が伝わりにくく、文法も不正確です。理由を明確に述べ、論理的に説明しましょう。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming." のように答えると良いです。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming.

提案: 文が途切れていたり、表現が不自然です。理由を明確に述べ、自然な英語で答えましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to check." のように答えると良いです。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to check.

× No, I don't. I don't make her is to buy something and basically I often buy something what I really want.

✓ No, I don't. I don't make a list to buy something and basically I often buy something that I really want.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used instead of 'a list'. Also, 'what' should be 'that' to correctly introduce a relative clause referring to 'something'. Replace 'her' with 'a list' and 'what' with 'that' for correct pronoun usage.

× Yes I do, when I studying English I often make a list to do like water yeast and I made a tourist to study English and yeah it worked so well.

✓ Yes, I do. When I study English, I often make a list to do things like water yeast, and I made a tourist list to study English, and yeah, it worked so well.

The verb 'studying' should be in the base form 'study' after 'when I'. Also, the sentence is unclear and seems to have errors in word choice ('water yeast', 'made a tourist'). The correction assumes intended meaning and adjusts verb forms accordingly.

× So a lot of people make arrest, I think.

✓ So a lot of people make a list, I think.

The word 'arrest' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'a list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× I want to make a list on my phone because. It is easy to watch what I should do on smartphone, so I think smart phone is much better.

✓ I want to make a list on my phone because it is easy to see what I should do on a smartphone, so I think a smartphone is much better.

The phrase 'easy to watch' is incorrect; 'easy to see' is appropriate. Also, 'on smartphone' should be 'on a smartphone' to include the article. Adding 'a' before 'smartphone' is necessary for correct article usage.