List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Make your answer more natural by using simple and clear sentences. For example, start with a direct answer, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear phrases like 'maybe into Radians'.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. This helps me remember what to buy and saves time at the store. For example, I often help my mom by listing the ingredients needed for dinner.

提案: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about how making lists helps your work efficiency.

例: Yes, I make a list when I have many tasks to complete in a day. This helps me organize my work and manage my time better. For instance, when I was volunteering in the community, lists helped me finish all my duties on time.

提案: Improve subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain reasons clearly. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike lists.

例: Although I like making lists, I understand some people don't. This is because they may find lists useless if they don't follow them strictly. Therefore, they feel making lists wastes their time and does not help improve productivity.

提案: Use correct grammar and complete sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'a stronger my man'. Clearly compare the advantages of both methods using linking words such as 'because' and 'however'.

例: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is less likely to get lost and I can check it anytime since I always carry my phone. However, making lists on paper can be helpful because writing by hand can improve memory.

× Oh yes, I do make a list when I went to the market for shipping since most of the time when you went to the shop went to the store.

✓ Oh yes, I do make a list when I go to the market for shopping since most of the time when you go to the shop or go to the store.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'went' when describing habitual actions. In English, habitual actions require present tense. Also, 'shipping' should be 'shopping'. Use present tense 'go' for habitual actions to improve clarity.

× The grocery store especially it's for to help my mom to buy maybe into Radians for the dinner.

✓ The grocery store especially is to help my mom buy maybe some ingredients for dinner.

The phrase 'for to help' is incorrect; 'to help' is sufficient. 'Into Radians' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'ingredients' fits context. Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity.

× Let's say analysts do helps me to work efficiently to know what to buy and what not.

✓ Let's say making a list helps me work efficiently to know what to buy and what not.

'Analysts' is incorrect here; likely meant 'making a list'. Also, 'do helps' is incorrect; 'helps' alone is correct. Pronoun and verb form need correction for grammatical accuracy.

× Oh yes, I do make a list for my work if it is necessary when I have a lot of work to do to be completed within a day.

✓ Oh yes, I do make a list for my work if it is necessary when I have a lot of work to complete within a day.

The phrase 'to do to be completed' is awkward and redundant. Simplify to 'work to complete' to maintain present tense and clarity.

× To make myself more efficiently, I would like to make a list and list on what else I have to do within a date so I can follow strictly and finish everything that I have to do within a limited time, especially when I was in the community.

✓ To make myself more efficient, I like to make a list of what else I have to do within a day so I can follow it strictly and finish everything within a limited time, especially when I am in the community.

'More efficiently' should be 'more efficient' as it describes the subject. 'List on' should be 'list of'. 'Within a date' should be 'within a day'. 'Was' should be 'am' to match present context. Prepositions and verb tenses corrected for accuracy.

× Even though I'm the type of person who like to make list, but somehow I can also understand why people doesn't like to make list.

✓ Even though I'm the type of person who likes to make lists, I can also understand why people don't like to make lists.

'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject 'who'. 'Doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural 'people'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' for general meaning. Pronoun and subject-verb agreement corrected.

× Even though I'm the type of person who like to make list, but somehow I can also understand why people doesn't like to make list.

✓ Even though I'm the type of person who likes to make lists, I can also understand why people don't like to make lists.

Using both 'Even though' and 'but' together is redundant. Remove 'but' to correct conjunction usage.

× First of all, they might think is useless because they might not follow it strictly and it doesn't improve efficiency of their working, It doesn't make them more productive and at the same time a waste their time of making the list.

✓ First of all, they might think it is useless because they might not follow it strictly and it doesn't improve the efficiency of their work. It doesn't make them more productive and at the same time wastes their time making the list.

Missing pronoun 'it' after 'think'. 'Efficiency of their working' should be 'efficiency of their work'. 'A waste their time' should be 'wastes their time'. Pronouns and noun forms corrected for clarity.

× And my personal opinions, I prefers to make a list on my phone instead of a paper 'cause I feel like making the list on the paper can.

✓ In my personal opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of paper because I feel like making the list on paper can...

'I prefers' should be 'I prefer' as 'I' takes base verb form. 'Opinions' should be singular 'opinion' after 'my personal'. 'A paper' should be 'paper' without article. Correct verb form and article usage.

× The easily lost compared to the phone.

✓ It can be easily lost compared to the phone.

Missing subject 'It' and auxiliary verb 'can be' needed. 'The easily lost' is incorrect; 'easily lost' is an adjective phrase needing a verb. Preposition usage corrected.

× And then if I read it on my phone, I can regular check it 'cause the phone was always in my hand, is always in my pocket.

✓ And then if I read it on my phone, I can regularly check it because the phone is always in my hand or in my pocket.

'Regular' should be adverb 'regularly'. 'Was always' should be 'is always' to indicate habitual present action. Verb tense and adverb form corrected.

× But at the same times make a list on the paper was good 'cause a stronger my man.

✓ But at the same time, making a list on paper is good because it strengthens my memory.

'At the same times' should be 'at the same time'. 'Make' should be 'making' to act as a noun. 'Was good' changed to 'is good' for present tense. 'A stronger my man' is unclear; likely 'strengthens my memory'. Conjunction and phrase corrected for clarity.