List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some unnatural phrases and minor grammar mistakes. For example, "chicken list" seems incorrect; you probably meant "shopping list." Try to use clear and correct vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear expressions. For example, "I don't made it at least" is incorrect; use "I don't make one usually." Also, clarify your ideas with linking words and correct verb tenses. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and naturally.

例: Actually, I don't usually make a list for my work because I can remember my tasks. However, sometimes I do make one, and it helps me complete everything efficiently without wasting time.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains contradictions. You said "some people like making list" instead of "don't like." Also, avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory. However, lists can be very helpful for busy people with families to save time and money.

提案: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "make a lease" should be "make a list," and "convertible" is incorrect here; use "convenient." Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words.

例: I mostly prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. I can use it anywhere, and it's always with me. However, some people still like using paper lists because they find them interesting and easy to use.

× Yes, I make a chicken list because it helps me to remember what I need and buy everything without some things that I don't really need.

✓ Yes, I make a checklist because it helps me to remember what I need and buy everything without buying things that I don't really need.

The phrase 'chicken list' is incorrect; the correct term is 'checklist'. Also, 'without some things that I don't really need' is unclear and should be 'without buying things that I don't really need' to clarify the meaning.

× Actually I don't made it at least because I remember all those things, but sometimes to recognize my work I need to do it and it really helped to do everything without wasting time.

✓ Actually, I don't make it usually because I remember all those things, but sometimes to organize my work I need to do it and it really helps to do everything without wasting time.

The phrase 'don't made' is incorrect; 'don't' should be followed by the base form 'make'. Also, 'recognize my work' is incorrect; 'organize my work' fits better. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense context.

× In my opinion, some people like making list because it helps to recognize and remember things that they that they need and. Don't waste their money and time and it very helpful for people who have children, family and don't have enough time.

✓ In my opinion, some people like making lists because it helps to recognize and remember things that they need and not waste their money and time. It is very helpful for people who have children, family, and don't have enough time.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some people'. Also, sentence fragments and punctuation errors were corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Mostly I prefer to make a lease on your phone because it's very. Convertible. It's very convenient, you can easily use it whatever where you are and it's always on your hand.

✓ Mostly, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. You can easily use it wherever you are and it's always in your hand.

'Lease' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. 'Your phone' should be 'my phone' to match the speaker's perspective. 'Convertible' is incorrect; 'convenient' is the correct adjective. 'Whatever where you are' should be 'wherever you are'. 'On your hand' should be 'in your hand'.