List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和不自然的表达，例如“Just when you shop”不太自然。建议开头直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping, especially for groceries. This helps me stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary items. I write it down in my phone's notes app, which is very convenient and saves time.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，如“because”或“so”。另外，“To Do List”前应加冠词“a”。

例: Yes, I usually make a To-Do List every morning before I start work because it helps me keep track of tasks and feel more organized. Moreover, I feel motivated when I check items off the list, as it gives me a small sense of achievement.

提案: 回答中出现了拼写错误（'making less'应为'making lists'），且最后一句是反问句，不适合回答部分。建议避免拼写错误，保持回答的正式和完整。

例: Some people find making lists troublesome because it can make them feel stressed or restricted, as if they have to follow a fixed plan. Therefore, they prefer to be more flexible and do things spontaneously.

提案: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词如“because”或“so”来增强连贯性。

例: I usually make lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I can edit them anytime and set reminders if needed. Also, since I always have my phone with me, I won't forget what's on the list when I go out.

× I just write it down in my phones notes app.

✓ I just write it down in my phone's notes app.

这里的错误是复数形式和所有格的使用错误。'phones notes app' 应该是 'phone's notes app'，表示手机的笔记应用。需要用所有格形式来表示所属关系。

× Yes, I usually make it To Do List every morning before I start work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a To Do List every morning before I start work.

这里缺少冠词'a'，'To Do List'是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词'a'。

× Some people think making less is too much trouble.

✓ Some people think making lists is too much trouble.

这里'making less'是错误的，应该是'making lists'，表示制作清单。'less'是形容词，不能代替复数名词'lists'。