List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当（如'MRD'不明确）。建议使用更准确的词汇，注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免缩写不明。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time. With a clear plan, I can focus on important tasks and finish them more efficiently.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免拼写错误，句子结构应更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming. For example, they prefer to remember things in their head rather than writing them down. Also, they feel that lists limit flexibility and spontaneity.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，句子应简洁明了。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient to carry my phone when I go out.

× Of course I prefer to make list.

✓ Of course I prefer to make a list.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× Will I show up?

✓ Will I show it?

这里的表达不符合语境，应该是“Will I show it?”表示“我会展示它吗？”，而“show up”意为“出现”，不符合上下文。

× I always make a list of all my work 'cause it helps me stay organized and saves a lot over time.

✓ I always make a list of all my work 'cause it helps me stay organized and saves a lot of time.

短语“saves a lot over time”缺少“of time”，正确表达是“saves a lot of time”，表示节省大量时间。

× By having a clear plan I can focus on important tasks and finishes them more efficiently.

✓ By having a clear plan I can focus on important tasks and finish them more efficiently.

主语“I”后动词应使用原形“finish”，因为情态动词“can”后接动词原形。

× Will e-mail opinion.

✓ I will email my opinion.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且“e-mail”作为动词时应写作“email”，需要补充主语“I”和宾语“my opinion”。

× Some people don't like making lists because they found it inconvenient and time-consuming.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming.

前半句使用现在时“don't like”，后半句应保持时态一致，故“found”应改为现在时“find”。

× they might prefer to remember since in their head rather than writing them down.

✓ they might prefer to remember things in their head rather than writing them down.

“remember since”不正确，应为“remember things”，且“in their head”表示在脑中记忆。

× Also, some people feel that making lists limit 0 flexibility and spontaneously.

✓ Also, some people feel that making lists limits flexibility and spontaneity.

“lists”是复数，谓语动词应为第三人称单数“limits”，且“spontaneously”应改为名词“spontaneity”。

× I love to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient for me to take the phone when I was got out.

✓ I love to make a list on my phone because I think it's convenient for me to take the phone when I go out.

“when I was got out”时态和结构错误，应为一般现在时“when I go out”，表示习惯性动作。