List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you while shopping.

例: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I sometimes forget what to buy. Therefore, having a list helps me remember everything and avoid missing important items.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity by using proper linking words and avoiding awkward phrasing. Explain clearly how making lists helps you be efficient at work.

例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me ensure that I don't skip any tasks. As a result, I can complete my work efficiently and stay organized.

提案: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'year perspective dust'. Use linking words to explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, and keep your answer relevant and concise.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they dislike writing or often forget to bring the list with them. Therefore, making lists is not a habit for everyone.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain why you prefer your phone over paper for making lists.

例: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because, with technological advancements, it is easier and more convenient. Moreover, my phone is portable, so I can carry my list anywhere without any trouble.

× Yes, I often make a list when I shop becauses as I am a little bit too weak at recognizing things so I make list.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I am a little bit weak at recognizing things, so I make a list.

The word 'becauses as' is incorrect; 'because' alone is sufficient to explain the reason. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the article. The conjunction 'so' correctly connects the two clauses, but the sentence needs proper punctuation and article usage.

× Yes, I often make a list when I shop becauses as I am a little bit too weak at recognizing things so I make list.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I am a little bit weak at recognizing things, so I make a list.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article, so it should be 'make a list'.

× So that nothing should be scared while shopping.

✓ So that nothing should be missed while shopping.

The word 'scared' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'missed'. 'Should be missed' is the correct modal verb usage here to express something that ought not to happen.

× As nothing should be skipped, while I do different talks, it always works.

✓ As nothing should be skipped while I do different tasks, it always works.

The phrase 'do different talks' is incorrect; 'do different tasks' is appropriate. The modal verb 'should be skipped' is correctly used to express something that ought not to happen.

× As I am really proved as efficient while doing my tasks.

✓ As I have really proved to be efficient while doing my tasks.

The phrase 'proved as efficient' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'proved to be efficient'. The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'proved' in this context.

× As per my perspective it depends on the choice of the persons as some not like to write much and some also for get to take the list with them.

✓ From my perspective, it depends on people's choices as some do not like to write much and some also forget to take the list with them.

The phrase 'some not like' is missing the auxiliary verb 'do'. 'For get' is a misspelling of 'forget'. 'Choice of the persons' is better expressed as 'people's choices'. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I don't think so that every people thought to make this.

✓ So I don't think that every person thinks to make this.

The word 'people' is plural, so 'every people' is incorrect; it should be 'every person'. Also, 'thought' should be 'thinks' to match the present tense context.

× It depends on the year perspective dust.

✓ It depends on the year's perspective, I guess.

The phrase 'year perspective dust' is unclear and likely a mishearing or miswriting. Assuming the intended phrase is 'year's perspective'. The word 'dust' is incorrect here and should be omitted or replaced with a suitable phrase like 'I guess' for informal speech.

× I prefer to make list on my smartphone as with the advancement in technology it is quite easy to make.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my smartphone as with the advancement in technology it is quite easy to make.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Singular countable nouns require an article, so it should be 'make a list'.

× List on smartphone as it is portable and easy to carry any worse, so I often make list on my smart phone.

✓ A list on a smartphone as it is portable and easy to carry anywhere, so I often make a list on my smartphone.

The phrase 'any worse' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'anywhere'. Also, 'list' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Smartphone' should be one word consistently.