List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的句式，并注意主谓一致和时态。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Without a list, I often forget some items.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和介词，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, I might note that I have a meeting at 8:00 am.

提案: 回答不连贯，句子断断续续，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰地表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they often don't follow them. As a result, making a list seems useless to them.

提案: 回答中有很多断句和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达偏好和原因，并避免重复和无意义的停顿。

例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy writing them neatly. I like to look at the list from time to time to remind myself of my tasks.

× Make a list can let me know what I want to buy when I'm in a shop.

✓ Making a list can let me know what I want to buy when I'm in a shop.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示动作的进行或习惯，句中应使用动名词作主语。

× If I go shopping without a list I will miss something.

✓ If I go shopping without a list, I will miss something.

条件句中，主句使用will表示将来时，语法正确，但缺少逗号，建议加上以分隔条件状语从句。

× Make a list when I'm work can make me know what I need to do on at every time for example.

✓ Making a list when I'm working can help me know what I need to do at every time, for example.

动词作主语时应使用动名词形式；'work'作为动词时应使用现在分词'working'表示正在进行的动作。

× Make a list when I'm work can make me know what I need to do on at every time for example.

✓ Making a list when I'm working can help me know what I need to do at every time, for example.

介词'on'和'at'使用错误，'at every time'表示在每个时间点，'on'不适用。

× In my opinion, the reason is because people. Don't follow their list.

✓ In my opinion, the reason is that people don't follow their list.

句子结构错误，'the reason is because'重复，正确表达应为'the reason is that'，且句子不应断开。

× They just make a list but don't follow the list, so making a list. Is. It doesn't work.

✓ They just make a list but don't follow it, so making a list doesn't work.

句子断裂，缺少主谓结构，且重复使用'list'，应简化为代词。

× They just make a list but don't follow the list, so making a list. Is. It doesn't work.

✓ They just make a list but don't follow it, so making a list doesn't work.

代词使用不当，重复使用名词显得累赘，应使用代词'it'代替。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper and I will write. The list very beautiful so.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper and I will write the list very beautifully, so...

介词使用正确，但句子断裂且缺少副词形式，'beautiful'应改为副词'beautifully'修饰动词'write'。

× I will write. The list very beautiful so.

✓ I will write the list very beautifully, so...

'beautiful'是形容词，修饰名词；修饰动词时应使用副词'beautifully'。

× I will. I would like to see it from time to time.

✓ I would like to see it from time to time.

句子中'I will.'独立成句，结构不完整，应合并或删除。

× In that case I can. Photo Mike list.

✓ In that case, I can take a photo of my list.

句子断裂且单词拼写错误，'Photo Mike list'应为'take a photo of my list'，表达完整意思。