List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason or example to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, explain why you make a list or how it helps you.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: Your answer is generally good but has some grammar mistakes and unclear parts. For example, 'all the task' should be 'all the tasks', and 'eldest' is unclear—do you mean your eldest child? Also, avoid redundancy and improve linking words for coherence. Try to be more specific and clear in your examples.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work every day because it helps me stay organized and focused. By writing down all the tasks I need to complete, I can track my progress and manage my time better. For example, when I have a busy day, my eldest child reminds me of important deadlines to ensure I don't forget any tasks.

提案: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Avoid starting sentences with 'Will' incorrectly. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly to make your answer coherent. Be more specific about reasons why people avoid lists and why you think lists are helpful.

例: I believe many people don't like making lists because they think they can manage their work based on their ability. However, I think making a list every day is necessary because it helps track progress and manage time more efficiently, especially when they are busy.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases like 'with me' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express convenience.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it very convenient. This way, I can easily add or check items anytime without needing paper.

× By writing down all the task I need to complete, I can easily track my progress and manage my time more efficiently.

✓ By writing down all the tasks I need to complete, I can easily track my progress and manage my time more efficiently.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items that need to be completed. In English, when referring to more than one item, the noun should be in plural form.

× my eldest reminds me of important deadlines and ensure that I don't for get any important tax that day.

✓ my eldest reminds me of important deadlines and ensures that I don't forget any important task that day.

The verb 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'my eldest'. Also, 'for get' is a typo and should be 'forget'. Additionally, 'tax' is likely a typo for 'task'. The third person singular subject requires the verb to have an 's' at the end in present tense.

× Will I believe that a lot of people don't like to make a list for their work every day, because they think they can do their work according to their ability.

✓ I believe that a lot of people don't like to make a list for their work every day, because they think they can do their work according to their ability.

The modal verb 'Will' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence. It should be removed to form a correct statement. 'Will' is used for future tense or questions, not for expressing belief in this context.

× But I think it's necessary to make a list for every day works so that they can easily track their progress and manage their time more efficiently Will when they are busy.

✓ But I think it's necessary to make a list for everyday work so that they can easily track their progress and manage their time more efficiently when they are busy.

The word 'Will' is incorrectly placed at the end of the sentence and should be removed. Also, 'every day works' should be 'everyday work' as 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common' or 'daily', and 'work' is uncountable here.

× Well I do prefer to make a list on my phone as it's easy for me to carry the phone all the time with me as it always with me.

✓ Well, I do prefer to make a list on my phone as it's easy for me to carry the phone all the time since it is always with me.

The phrase 'with me as it always with me' is incorrect. It should be 'since it is always with me' to correctly express the reason. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves sentence clarity.

× So I think it's a convenient for me to make the list on phone.

✓ So I think it's convenient for me to make the list on the phone.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'convenient' because 'convenient' is an adjective describing the situation, not a noun. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' to specify the device.