List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answers more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid short, incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, so I didn't forget anything important.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you manage time effectively. Try to complete your thoughts in full sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I have work to do because it helps me manage my time better. By following the list, I can complete tasks within the deadline and save time for other activities.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid incorrect word choices. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to explain reasons clearly. Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to do tasks spontaneously, which they believe saves time.

提案: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference and give specific reasons. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the notes app because everyone has a phone nowadays. For example, if I notice something is missing at home, I quickly add it to my list so I don't forget to buy it.

× Yes, I usually make list when I go for shopping because it helps me too.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me too.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× For example, when I go for shopping it I always having a list so that I did not forgot something important.

✓ For example, when I go shopping, I always have a list so that I do not forget something important.

The verb 'having' is incorrectly used; the correct form is 'have' to match the present simple tense. Also, 'did not forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'do not forget' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, I I always make a list whenever I do any work because it saves my times and helps me to do everything be within the time period an in which in this way I can I can save my more time and. Uh.

✓ Yes, I always make a list whenever I do any work because it saves my time and helps me to do everything within the time period, and in this way I can save more time.

The word 'times' should be singular 'time' when referring to an uncountable concept. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and fluency.

× Some people don't make English because they are feel like this is a waste of time because they they feel like it is a vestige of time.

✓ Some people don't make lists because they feel like this is a waste of time because they feel like it is a waste of time.

The phrase 'don't make English' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make lists'. Also, 'are feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'feel'. The word 'vestige' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'waste'.

× Instead of making list they just perform whatever they want to do any work.

✓ Instead of making lists, they just perform whatever work they want to do.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× In this area everyone have their phones so I preferred to make list on my notes app.

✓ In this area, everyone has their phones, so I prefer to make lists on my notes app.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. 'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match context.

× It is a best F app according to me because whenever I've whenever there is something not available in my home or kitchen, I just opened this app and I type this thing is not in my home so I had to buy this.

✓ It is the best app according to me because whenever there is something not available in my home or kitchen, I just open this app and type that this thing is not in my home, so I have to buy it.

The article 'a' should be 'the' before 'best' as it is a superlative adjective. 'F app' is unclear and removed for clarity. Verb tenses are corrected to present tense for consistency. 'I had to buy this' is corrected to 'I have to buy it' to match present context.