List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, explain why you don't make a list and how it affects your shopping experience, using correct sentence structures.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it more relaxing to shop spontaneously. For instance, I enjoy browsing and choosing items without planning too much, which makes the experience more exciting for me.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains pronunciation and grammar mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your opinion. Also, use appropriate vocabulary related to work and focus.

例: I know that making a list for work is very important and effective. However, I don't often make one because it makes me focus too much on certain tasks, and I prefer to stay flexible throughout the day.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain why some people dislike making lists, using linking words and specific reasons.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it forces them to concentrate too much on one task. As a result, they might find it stressful and prefer to work more freely.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to answer directly whether you prefer paper or phone lists, then explain your choice with specific reasons and linking words. Use complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

例: Although I have never made a list before, if I had to choose, I would prefer to make a list on my phone because it can remind me when tasks are due and is more convenient to carry around.

× And no, I don't because I'm I think that make a feelings relax.

✓ No, I don't because I think that makes me feel relaxed.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order, making it unclear. 'I'm I think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'. 'Make a feelings relax' is ungrammatical; it should be 'makes me feel relaxed'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When I go shopping is very.

✓ When I go shopping, I feel very excited.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb after 'When I go shopping'. Adding 'I feel very excited' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× Excited, I want to mind about what I want to buy him an just relax.

✓ I get excited, and I don't want to think about what I want to buy; I just want to relax.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I want to mind about' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't want to think about'. 'Him an just relax' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects grammar.

× I know make a lease for doing work is very important an effective. Lee, but I'm not.

✓ I know making a list for work is very important and effective, but I don't often do it.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'make a lease' should be 'making a list'; 'an effective. Lee' is a mishearing of 'and effective'; 'but I'm not' is incomplete. The correction fixes these errors and completes the thought.

× I think I'm not often duelist because it make me focus.

✓ I think I don't often make lists because it makes me focus too much.

'Duelist' is a mishearing of 'do lists' or 'make lists'. 'It make me focus' should be 'it makes me focus'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb agreement.

× Somethings too much an I don't want it to be.

✓ Sometimes too much, and I don't want it to be.

'Somethings' should be 'sometimes' (an adverb, not plural noun). The correction fixes this and adds a comma for clarity.

× Just like your reasons, I told you before, I think that because it make people can concentrate on the work and they're also use 100's efforts to do to focus on something and it make more. Effective.

✓ Just like I told you before, I think that making lists helps people concentrate on work, and they also use a lot of effort to focus on something, which makes it more effective.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Because it make people can concentrate' is incorrect; it should be 'helps people concentrate'. 'They're also use 100's efforts' is incorrect; it should be 'they also use a lot of effort'. The correction clarifies and corrects these errors.

× I have never tried to. Tried to make a list before but for me to choose thing I will choose make a list on my phone because it can notice me when the time's up and also it has the. Something. Anything.

✓ I have never tried to make a list before, but if I had to choose, I would choose to make a list on my phone because it can notify me when the time is up, and it has other useful features.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Tried to. Tried to' is repetitive. 'Choose thing' should be 'choose', and 'it can notice me' should be 'it can notify me'. 'It has the. Something. Anything.' is unclear; replaced with 'other useful features' for clarity.