List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习正确的时态和句子结构，避免断断续续的表达。可以尝试用完整的句子描述购物清单的内容，并且保持回答的连贯性。

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping. For example, I usually write down items like fruits, vegetables, meat, and other essentials that I need to buy.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不流畅，建议练习使用完整句子并正确使用时态。可以具体说明制作工作清单的好处和具体内容，使回答更具体和连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before work because it helps me remember important tasks. For example, I write down meetings, deadlines, and things I need to prepare.

提案: 回答表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。可以尝试解释为什么有些人觉得做清单麻烦或浪费时间。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or time-consuming. They may feel it slows them down or they prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习用完整句子表达偏好，并说明原因。可以具体说明用手机做清单的便利性。

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier to keep and I won't lose it like paper lists.

× Yes I do, I always make a list when I was shop.

✓ Yes I do, I always make a list when I shop.

这里的动作是习惯性现在时，不能用过去时"was shop"，应使用一般现在时"shop"。

× For example, I will. Would. Please the many. Suits. Meats. Oh, vegetables. What I wanted to buy.

✓ For example, I will buy many suits, meats, and vegetables that I want to buy.

原句结构混乱，缺少完整句子和连贯表达，应将零散词语组成完整句子。

× Yes, I usually make list before my walk is very useful.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before my work; it is very useful.

缺少冠词"a"，且"walk"应为"work"，表示工作。

× For example, I always. Make a list. Which right down so many important things, just like I have to remember some details while now.

✓ For example, I always make a list which writes down many important things, like details I have to remember now.

句子断裂且表达不完整，应合并成完整句子，调整词序。

× Be 'cause I think it's not a very easy thing. To making lists.

✓ Because I think it's not a very easy thing to make lists.

"Be 'cause"应为"Because"，且"to making"应为不定式"to make"。

× Many people sayings. If they. Have. Met something, have to slow slow moved.

✓ Many people say that if they meet something, they have to move slowly.

句子断裂且语法错误，应调整为完整句子，使用正确时态和词汇。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because 'cause I think.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think.

"because 'cause"重复，应只用"because"或"'cause"。

× If I make Lisa on one paper, I will. Zeus it. It's it's very hard to keep.

✓ If I make a list on paper, I will lose it. It's very hard to keep.

"Lisa"应为"list"，"Zeus it"应为"lose it"，句子断裂需合并成完整句子。