List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason. For example, say "Yes, I always make a long shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items."

例: Yes, I always make a long shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Focus on clarity and correct sentence structure. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, say "Yes, I like to make a list for my work because managing tasks is challenging. I usually put important emails at the top of the list."

例: Yes, I like to make a list for my work because managing tasks is challenging. I usually put important emails at the top of the list.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally."

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

提案: Good idea but improve sentence flow and grammar. For example, "I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it gives me the flexibility to check my list anytime."

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it gives me the flexibility to check my list anytime.

× Yes definitely. I make a make a long list when I'm when I am on a shopping as I don't want to over by.

✓ Yes, definitely. I make a long list when I go shopping because I don't want to overbuy.

The original sentence has repetition ('make a make a'), incorrect phrase 'on a shopping', and 'over by' instead of 'overbuy'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I love to make a list for my work as managing work is a big task for me and I usually. Making my meals a PUT, making my mails at the top of the list.

✓ Yes, I love to make a list for my work as managing work is a big task for me, and I usually put making my meals at the top of the list.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Making my meals a PUT' and 'making my mails'. The sentence structure needs correction to form a complete and clear sentence.

× I can't comment on them all, but I think that from my perspective people. Or people are sure birthday but they want to do so they think that make English these are time based.

✓ I can't comment on everyone, but from my perspective, some people are unsure about making lists because they think it wastes time.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'people are sure birthday' and 'make English these are time based'. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as it provides me. Flexibility to watch my list anytime as I want.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone as it provides me the flexibility to check my list anytime I want.

The phrase 'Flexibility to watch my list' is incorrect; 'watch' should be replaced with 'check'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be combined properly for clarity.