List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to speak more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, and keep your sentences concise and grammatically correct. For example, say: "Yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves time and money."

例: Yes, I make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves time and money.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid filler words. Use linking words like "so" to explain the purpose of your list. For example: "Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work so I can prioritize tasks and complete them efficiently."

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work so I can prioritize tasks and complete them efficiently.

提案: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and "however" to explain reasons and contrast opinions. For example: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to keep track of them; however, others find lists helpful."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to keep track of them; however, others find lists helpful.

提案: Improve clarity and grammar by structuring your answer well. Use linking words like "because" to explain reasons. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send reminders and notifications throughout the day, which helps me stay organized."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send reminders and notifications throughout the day, which helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I do so it so it can keep me Chuck of the things that I want to buy and save me from the other X excessive thing that I don't need and it just saves my time and. And keep it. Track out of it.

✓ Yes, I do so it can keep me track of the things that I want to buy and save me from other excessive things that I don't need and it just saves my time and keeps track of it.

The phrase 'keep me Chuck of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'keep me track of'. Also, 'other X excessive thing' should be 'other excessive things' to match plural form. 'Keep it. Track out of it.' is incorrect and should be 'keeps track of it.' The prepositions 'of' and 'from' are used incorrectly or missing in places, so correcting them improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I do so it so it can keep me Chuck of the things that I want to buy and save me from the other X excessive thing that I don't need and it just saves my time and. And keep it. Track out of it.

✓ Yes, I do so it can keep me track of the things that I want to buy and save me from other excessive things that I don't need and it just saves my time and keeps track of it.

The phrase 'the other X excessive thing' is incorrect because 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'other' and the context. Using the correct quantifier 'other' with plural noun 'things' is necessary for grammatical agreement.

× Yes, I usually do it to do this too tall for all the things that I need to do that I need to be done by the day so I can know what I what I should be doing 1st and what I should be doing last.

✓ Yes, I usually do it to make a to-do list for all the things that I need to do that need to be done by the day so I can know what I should be doing first and what I should be doing last.

The phrase 'to do this too tall for' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a to-do list for'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used with 'list'. Also, 'by the day' is acceptable but 'by the end of the day' would be clearer. Correcting prepositions and phrases improves clarity.

× Most people can't tell a can't keep a shock of the thing that they written in the list, so they think that the list is just a waste of time, but just a point of view of them. So it is it is different from people to another.

✓ Most people can't keep track of the things that they have written in the list, so they think that the list is just a waste of time, but that's just their point of view. So it is different from person to person.

The phrase 'can't keep a shock of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'can't keep track of'. 'The thing that they written' should be 'the things that they have written' to use correct pronoun and verb form. 'Just a point of view of them' should be 'just their point of view'. 'Different from people to another' should be 'different from person to person'. Correct pronoun usage and expressions improve grammatical correctness and clarity.

× In my point of view I think using my phone it can be more effectively because the phone can give you like barners when you will be turning this thing and it send you notification or through the all throughout the day.

✓ In my point of view, I think using my phone can be more effective because the phone can give you banners when you are turning on things and it sends you notifications throughout the day.

The phrase 'In my point of view' should be 'In my point of view,' with a comma. 'More effectively' should be 'more effective' because it modifies 'can be'. 'Barners' is a misspelling of 'banners'. 'When you will be turning this thing' should be 'when you are turning on things'. 'It send you notification or through the all throughout the day' should be 'it sends you notifications throughout the day'. Correct prepositions and verb forms improve clarity and grammar.