List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有直接回答问题，而是重复了考官的问题。建议直接回答问题，并简要说明原因。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，并具体说明列表如何帮助你的工作。

例: Yes, I make a detailed list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

提案: 回答内容与问题不符，且表达不清楚。建议直接回答为什么有些人不喜欢做清单，并给出具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议直接回答偏好，并说明原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to write things down and I don't like using my phone for this purpose.

× I make a very perfectly still for my work.

✓ I make a very perfect list for my work.

句中使用了副词“perfectly”修饰形容词“still”，且“still”应为“list”。应使用形容词“perfect”修饰名词“list”，且拼写错误需改正。

× Be 'cause I think some people like making lists.

✓ Because I think some people like making lists.

“Be 'cause”是口语缩写形式，书面语应使用完整形式“Because”。

× Be 'cause it is very convenient and it is very good.

✓ Because it is very convenient and very good.

同上，使用完整的“Because”代替口语缩写“Be 'cause”，且去掉重复的“it is”使句子更简洁。

× I prefer to make list on paper 'cause I don't like to use my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because I don't like to use my phone.

“list”应为复数形式“lists”，因为表达的是一般习惯或多次行为。且“'cause”应改为正式的“because”。