List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复。可以用更连贯的句子表达你的观点。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously without any restrictions.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的句子结构，并解释原因时使用连词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because it might make me feel stressed and reduce my enthusiasm.

提案: 回答不连贯且句子断断续续，建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连词连接，使表达更流畅。

例: Some people, like me, don't like making lists because we prefer to stay relaxed and don't want to be disturbed by strict plans.

提案: 回答中有发音和用词错误，建议注意发音和用词准确性，句子应更完整和连贯。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient; I can check or add items anytime and anywhere.

× I do not make a list when I when I shop be 'cause I'm a quiet. Casual person, I do not want list to disturb me.

✓ I do not make a list when I shop because I'm a quiet, casual person. I do not want a list to disturb me.

句中出现了重复的主语“when I when I”，且“be 'cause”是不正确的表达，应改为“because”。此外，“list”前缺少冠词“a”。这些都是代词和冠词使用错误。

× I don't need. I don't need. A list.

✓ I don't need a list.

句子中断断续续，且“a list”前面不应有句号，应连贯表达。量词使用不当导致句子不完整。

× I only want to buy things that I want to buy at that time.

✓ I only want to buy the things that I want to buy at that time.

此处“things”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指当时想买的东西。

× I do not make a list for my work if I made a list.

✓ I do not make a list for my work. If I make a list,

句子时态不一致，前半句用现在时，后半句用过去时，应保持时态一致，使用现在时。

× I may feel a sense of stressful.

✓ I may feel a sense of stress.

“stressful”是形容词，不能用作名词，应使用名词“stress”。

× It could decrease my passion to work it.

✓ It could decrease my passion to work.

句尾多余的代词“it”应删除，句子更通顺。

× Well, because they may. People like me. We are relaxed people.

✓ Well, because they may be people like me. We are relaxed people.

句子断裂，缺少动词“be”，导致代词使用不当。

× I don't want. A list to disturb. Me.

✓ I don't want a list to disturb me.

句子断断续续，应连贯表达，量词使用正确。

× I prefer to make less on my phone 'cause from is very convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient.

“less”应为“lists”，且“from”应为“it”，代词使用错误。

× I can. Ticket out anywhere or anytime if I want to make a list.

✓ I can tick it off anywhere or anytime if I want to make a list.

“Ticket out”应为“tick it off”，且句子断裂，应连贯表达。