List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，直接回答问题，并解释原因。

例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it a bit troublesome and prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: 回答结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答，再用连词补充具体细节，避免无意义词汇。

例: Yes, I always make a list of tasks I need to complete because it helps me stay organized and work more efficiently.

提案: 回答简短且缺少连贯性，语法不完整。建议使用完整句子，并用连词扩展理由。

例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it troublesome and believe it doesn't help them stay organized.

提案: 回答较为自然，但语法和表达仍有不足。建议使用更准确的表达和连词，使回答更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I tend to lose paper lists, and having them on my phone makes it easier to check whenever I need.

× Actually I want make a list because I think it's troublesome.

✓ Actually I want to make a list because I think it's troublesome.

动词want后面需要接不定式to do，缺少to导致语法错误。

× Yes, I always make a list what things should I do and whatever to do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list of what things I should do and whatever needs to be done.

句子结构混乱，缺少介词of，且从句语序错误，应调整为陈述语序。

× I think it's making me effective.

✓ I think it makes me effective.

这里不应使用进行时态，且it作为主语，动词用一般现在时makes。

× Tutti always a problem.

✓ Tutti is always a problem.

句子缺少谓语动词is，导致句子不完整。

× Maybe they think is troublesome and meaningless.

✓ Maybe they think it is troublesome and meaningless.

think后面缺少宾语it，导致句子不完整。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm not a careful person.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I'm not a careful person.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Maybe I would have lost the paper, but in my phone I can read it whatever I want to do.

✓ Maybe I would have lost the paper, but on my phone I can read it whenever I want to.

介词应为on my phone，且句尾表达应为whenever I want to，表示任何时候。