List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list because I have a bad memory and don't want to forget anything important."

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I have a bad memory and want to make sure I don't forget anything important when I go shopping.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, say "Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget any important tasks."

例: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget any important tasks.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop directly or they have a good memory. For instance, my husband doesn't make lists because he remembers what he needs."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop directly or have a good memory. For example, my husband doesn't make lists when shopping because he remembers everything he needs.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and some unclear words. Try to combine sentences and use correct grammar. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier and phones have become an important and useful part of our lives."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier, and phones have become an important and useful part of our lives.

× I usually had a very bad memory and that's why I preferred go with at least that everything that I'm gonna be shopping that day.

✓ I usually have a very bad memory and that's why I prefer to go with at least everything that I'm going to be shopping that day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'had' and 'preferred' when the context requires present tense to describe a habitual action. Also, 'preferred go' is missing 'to' before the verb. Correcting to present tense 'have' and 'prefer' and adding 'to' before 'go' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually had a very bad memory and that's why I preferred go with at least that everything that I'm gonna be shopping that day.

✓ I usually have a very bad memory and that's why I prefer to go with at least everything that I'm going to be shopping that day.

The phrase 'go with at least that everything' is incorrect. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here and 'at least' should directly modify 'everything'. Removing 'with' and adjusting the phrase improves clarity and correctness.

× I usually make at least in my work.

✓ I usually make at least a list in my work.

The phrase 'make at least' is incomplete and unclear. 'At least' is a quantifier that needs to modify a noun. Adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning and corrects the quantifier usage.

× It helps me to get my job. Or my work organize and allows me to do everything and don't forget any important assignment.

✓ It helps me to get my job or my work organized and allows me to do everything and not forget any important assignment.

The phrase 'my work organize' is incorrect; it should be 'my work organized' to use the past participle as an adjective. Also, 'don't forget' should be 'not forget' to maintain parallel structure after 'allows me to'.

× I think some people's doesn't like making at least for a shopping because they go straight to why they need to buy an others are have a very good memory or our focus and what they need in.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list for shopping because they go straight to what they need to buy; others have a very good memory or focus on what they need.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'people's' should be 'people' (plural noun, not possessive), 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject, 'at least' should be 'a list', 'a shopping' should be 'shopping' without article, 'an others are have' is incorrect and should be 'others have', and 'our focus' should be 'focus'. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and plural usage.

× I think some people's doesn't like making at least for a shopping because they go straight to why they need to buy an others are have a very good memory or our focus and what they need in.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list for shopping because they go straight to what they need to buy; others have a very good memory or focus on what they need.

The phrase 'making at least' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, 'a shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is uncountable and does not need an article here.

× I think some people's doesn't like making at least for a shopping because they go straight to why they need to buy an others are have a very good memory or our focus and what they need in.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list for shopping because they go straight to what they need to buy; others have a very good memory or focus on what they need.

The phrase 'focus and what they need in' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'focus on what they need'. Removing 'in' and adding 'on' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× Phones has becoming a very important part of our life lately, An it's Betty useful is a very useful tool.

✓ Phones have become a very important part of our lives lately, and it's a very useful tool.

'Phones' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. 'Becoming' should be 'become' to form the present perfect tense. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'our'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Betty useful is a very useful tool' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'it's a very useful tool'.