List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and correct prepositions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the city because it helps me remember everything. I often use my phone to take notes."

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the city because it helps me remember everything. I often use my phone to take notes, which is very convenient.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured but try to improve grammar and word choice. For example, use plural form 'tasks' and avoid awkward phrases like 'add indispensable job'. Also, use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work when I'm in the office. I categorize tasks based on their urgency and importance so I can focus on the most necessary jobs first. This method helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

提案: Focus on clearer sentence structure and correct word forms. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they find them overwhelming, especially if the list is very long. They may feel stressed seeing many tasks written down. Others trust their memory and believe they can remember everything."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them overwhelming, especially if the list is very long. They may feel stressed seeing many tasks written down. Others trust their memory and believe they can remember everything they need.

提案: Improve your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, use 'write' instead of 'ride', and avoid unclear phrases like 'Either I will no need for the pain'. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural.

例: I personally prefer to write my lists on my phone because it is easy and convenient. I don't need paper or pen, and my phone is always with me, so I can check my list anytime I want.

× Yes, I do make a list while I am going to city to shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list while I am going to the city to shop.

The phrase 'to shopping' is incorrect because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'city' needs the definite article 'the' before it. So, 'to shopping' should be corrected to 'to shop' and 'city' to 'the city'.

× For a few reason I do that.

✓ For a few reasons I do that.

The phrase 'for a few reason' is incorrect because 'reason' should be plural when preceded by 'a few'. Also, 'for a few reasons' is the correct prepositional phrase to express multiple reasons.

× For example, most of time I note take note in my phone.

✓ For example, most of the time I take notes on my phone.

The phrase 'note take note' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'take notes'. Also, 'most of time' should be 'most of the time' with the definite article 'the'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone for notes.

× I categorize task based on their urgency and importance so I can focus on the most necessary add indispensable job first.

✓ I categorize tasks based on their urgency and importance so I can focus on the most necessary and indispensable jobs first.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'add' is incorrect and should be 'and'. 'Job' should be plural 'jobs' to match the plural context.

× Some people prefer not to make less lists because they find them overwhelming, specially if they list is.

✓ Some people prefer not to make many lists because they find them overwhelming, especially if their list is.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'lists' is countable, so 'many' is correct. 'Specially' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'especially'. 'They list' should be 'their list' to use the correct possessive pronoun.

× Very long.

✓ Very long.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence, e.g., 'because their list is very long.'

× For example, they might feel distressed by seeing many tasks or items writing down originally.

✓ For example, they might feel distressed by seeing many tasks or items written down originally.

The phrase 'items writing down' is incorrect. The past participle 'written down' should be used to describe items that have been recorded. 'Writing down' is a present participle and does not fit here.

× I personally prefer to ride the list on my phone because it's so easy and facilitated.

✓ I personally prefer to write the list on my phone because it's so easy and convenient.

'Ride' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write'. Also, 'facilitated' is not appropriate here; 'convenient' or 'easy' fits better to describe the ease of use.

× Either I will no need for the pain or for the paper.

✓ Also, I will not need the pen or the paper.

'Either' is incorrectly used; 'also' fits better. 'No need for the pain' is incorrect; it should be 'not need the pen'. 'Pain' is a misspelling of 'pen'. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here.

× I just simply type on my note, my note of the phone, whether the phone will be always with me and I can check anytime I want.

✓ I just simply type on my notes on the phone, which is always with me, and I can check anytime I want.

'My note, my note of the phone' is awkward and repetitive. 'Notes on the phone' is clearer. 'Whether' is incorrectly used; 'which' is appropriate to introduce a relative clause. 'Will be always' should be 'is always' for present tense consistency.