List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความถูกต้องของไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำให้เหมาะสม เช่น คำว่า 'by' ควรเป็น 'buy' และ 'doubt' ควรเป็น 'doubt' หรือไม่ควรใช้ในที่นี้ นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและเพิ่มความชัดเจน เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I only buy a few essential items like milk and bread. Since I only need two or three things, I find it easy to remember them without writing anything down. This way, I can save time and avoid carrying extra paper when I go shopping.

提案: คำตอบนี้มีปัญหาเรื่องความชัดเจนและไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น 'I always make a list for my studies' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมเหตุสมผล

例: It's the opposite of shopping. I always make a list for my studies, and it works very well for me because I can remember all the deadlines for my homework and important meetings for my group projects.

提案: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค และแก้ไขคำผิด เช่น 'write our note down' ควรเป็น 'write notes down' หรือ 'make notes'

例: Maybe some people are good at memorizing things, so they don't need to write notes down. Because of this, they can still finish their homework on time without making lists.

提案: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น 'make list' ควรเป็น 'make a list' และลดความซ้ำซ้อน ใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

例: For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry it everywhere. It's easier to store my lists there, and my phone has reminders to help me not forget anything important.

× No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I only by a few essential items like milk and bread since I only need two or three things.

✓ No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I only buy a few essential items like milk and bread since I only need two or three things.

The verb 'by' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'buy' which is the base form. This is a common spelling mistake. Use 'buy' when referring to purchasing something.

× I just find it easy to remember them without writing anything doubt.

✓ I just find it easy to remember them without writing anything down.

The phrase 'writing anything doubt' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'writing anything down' which means to write something on paper or record it. The word 'down' is necessary here as a particle to complete the phrasal verb 'write down'.

× Is opposite to the shopping.

✓ It is the opposite of shopping.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'Is' needs a subject like 'It'. Also, 'opposite to' should be 'opposite of' in this context. The corrected sentence is 'It is the opposite of shopping.'

× I always magnet to my studying and it is a.

✓ I am always focused on my studying and it is very effective.

'Magnet' is a noun and incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'I always focus on my studying'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear. Replacing with 'I am always focused on my studying and it is very effective' makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× Very good and work for me because I can remember all deadlines of my homework and all the important meeting of my group project when I have to.

✓ It works very well for me because I can remember all the deadlines for my homework and all the important meetings of my group project when I have to.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject. 'Very good and work for me' is incorrect; it should be 'It works very well for me'. Also, 'meeting' should be plural 'meetings' to match 'all the important'. The preposition 'of' should be 'for' when referring to deadlines.

× Maybe they're good at memorizing things so they don't need to write our note down the things that they have to do and to just.

✓ Maybe they're good at memorizing things so they don't need to write notes down about the things that they have to do.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here; it should be 'their' or omitted. Also, 'write our note down the things' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'write notes down about the things'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× And they can still do the homework on time.

✓ They can still do the homework on time.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be avoided in formal speech or writing. Removing 'And' improves sentence structure.

× For me I prefer to make list on my phone because I carry my phone with me anywhere an it is easier for me to load it in my phone because in my phone it has a reminder for me to not forget about anything that is important.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere and it is easier for me to load it on my phone since it has a reminder to help me not forget anything important.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'make a list on my phone'. 'Anywhere an' is incorrect; it should be 'everywhere and'. Also, 'load it in my phone' should be 'load it on my phone'. The sentence is long and can be improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.