List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'lid' instead of 'list'. To improve, use correct vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Also, try to keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to about 3-4 sentences.

例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I enjoy choosing items spontaneously. It feels more fun to pick things that catch my eye rather than following a list made beforehand.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'high school study' and 'for UM'. To improve, clarify your meaning, use correct grammar, and organise your answer with linking words to make it coherent and natural.

例: As a high school student, I make a list every day to organise my homework for all subjects. This method works well because it helps me complete all my tasks efficiently.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains vocabulary mistakes like 'lit' instead of 'list' and 'bullet' which is unclear. To improve, use accurate vocabulary and provide a clear, connected explanation with linking words.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to keep their day open and flexible. They feel that lists can be too restrictive and limit their freedom to do things spontaneously.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but contains a vocabulary error with 'lid' instead of 'list'. To improve, use correct words and try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition.

例: I definitely prefer making a list on paper because using my phone often distracts me with social media. Writing things down by hand helps me focus better.

× I find it more enjoyable to choose items that catch my eye at the moment rather than sticking to a lid made in advance.

✓ I find it more enjoyable to choose items that catch my eye at the moment rather than sticking to a list made in advance.

The word 'lid' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error affecting the adjective usage in the sentence.

× As a high school study, I definitely make a list every day for UM. Preparing my next day because I have a lot of homeworks for all the subjects on school and I think it works, it works.

✓ As a high school student, I definitely make a list every day for UM, preparing for my next day because I have a lot of homework for all the subjects at school and I think it works, it works.

The word 'study' should be 'student' to correctly refer to a person. 'Homeworks' is incorrect as 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised. Also, 'on school' should be 'at school' to use the correct preposition.

× Effectively because I can complete all my task.

✓ Effectively because I can complete all my tasks.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'all my', which refers to multiple items.

× Making lists. Some people dislike making lit because they prefer to leave the day open and flexible.

✓ Making lists. Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to leave the day open and flexible.

The word 'lit' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. This is a vocabulary error affecting the adjective usage in the sentence.

× They feel that bullet can be too restrictive and limit their freedom to do things.

✓ They feel that bullet points can be too restrictive and limit their freedom to do things.

The word 'bullet' alone is incorrect; the correct term is 'bullet points' when referring to list items. This is a vocabulary error affecting adjective usage.

× I definitely prefer making a lid on paper because when I use my phone to take my task, I often get easily distracted by social media and other apps.

✓ I definitely prefer making a list on paper because when I use my phone to take my tasks, I often get easily distracted by social media and other apps.

The word 'lid' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. These are vocabulary and singular/plural errors.