List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达混乱，缺乏直接回应问题的主题句。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，缺乏清晰的结构。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体例子或原因支持观点。

例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. However, their effectiveness depends on the complexity of the tasks.

提案: 表达不清晰且用词错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful or feel it limits their flexibility.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议简洁表达偏好并说明原因，避免冗余。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I get distracted easily when using my phone.

× Will, are you alleging although that kind of sickness?

✓ Will, are you alleging that kind of sickness?

句中'alleging although'结构不正确，'although'不应出现在这里，去掉'although'使句子通顺。

× 'Cause every time I need to go to the supermarket, I'm go for some specifics in this.

✓ 'Cause every time I need to go to the supermarket, I go for some specifics in this.

'I'm go'是错误的现在进行时态，应该用一般现在时'I go'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× So generally I don't need Lee need a list to buy something.

✓ So generally I don't really need a list to buy something.

'Lee need'是拼写错误，应为'really need'，且'list'是单数，前面用'a'。

× I just. Buy whatever, I thought.

✓ I just buy whatever I think of.

句子结构不完整，断句错误，应连成完整句子表达意思。

× Yes, sometimes I do do this kind of things to help me be more info in fact if but in terms in terms to answer whether it is work.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do these kinds of things to help me be more informed. In fact, to answer whether it works,

'this kind of things'应为'these kinds of things'，'it is work'应为'it works'。

× Zelle is really hard to answer because sometimes adult but sometimes it doesn't.

✓ It is really hard to answer because sometimes it does, but sometimes it doesn't.

'Zelle'应为'It'，句子缺少主语和谓语，且'times adult'无意义，应改为'it does'。

× It really depends on what situation so I was.

✓ It really depends on the situation, so I was not sure.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× I think it depends on their personalities or their habit of finishing their work books.

✓ I think it depends on their personalities or their habits of finishing their workbooks.

'habit'应为复数'habits'，'work books'应合成一个词'workbooks'。

× Some people just need more afraid to do things like maybe making least would make them fail stressful which can negatively affect their infectious.

✓ Some people are just more afraid to do things; maybe making lists would make them feel stressed, which can negatively affect their efficiency.

句中'need more afraid'用法错误，应为'are more afraid'；'making least'应为'making lists'；'fail stressful'应为'feel stressed'；'infectious'用词错误，应为'efficiency'。

× Generally I prefer to make a list on paper because as soon as I touch my phone then everything is done.

✓ Generally, I prefer to make a list on paper because as soon as I touch my phone, everything gets done.

句中缺少逗号，'everything is done'改为'gets done'更自然。

× The only thing I will do a scroll on my phone, watching the videos, chatting with my friends, everything except starting or following the east.

✓ The only thing I will do is scroll on my phone, watch videos, chat with my friends—everything except starting or following the list.

句子缺少谓语动词'is'，'a scroll'应为'scroll'，'watching'和'chatting'应改为动词原形以保持并列结构，'east'应为'list'。

× So it must prefer making it.

✓ So I must prefer making it.

'it must prefer'主语错误，应为第一人称'I'。