List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid sentence fragments and improve sentence flow for more natural speech. For example, combine short sentences and use linking words to make your answer smoother and clearer.

例: It depends on the situation. Usually, I make a list when I have many things to buy because it helps me remember everything and stick to the budget. However, if I'm just going out to buy a few specific items, I don't bother making a list since it's easier to remember; this way, I save time and avoid unnecessary stress.

提案: Pay attention to grammar and word choice, such as articles and verb tenses. Also, avoid using numbers like '1st' in spoken answers; instead, say 'first'. This will make your answer more natural and accurate.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks. For example, by listing everything I need to do, I can focus on the most important jobs first and avoid forgetting anything. This method really improves my productivity and ensures I deliver my work on time.

提案: Be careful with word choice and pronunciation, such as 'afford' which should be 'effort'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because it can be quite time-consuming and tedious. For example, they might find it difficult to organize their thoughts or feel that writing things down takes too much effort. Additionally, some people prefer to keep things spontaneous rather than planning everything in advance.

提案: Avoid unclear phrases like 'aged old last' and improve sentence structure. Use clear and simple expressions to explain your ideas effectively and naturally.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and I don't have to worry about the paper getting wet or torn. Also, paper lists can easily get damaged over time. But my phone keeps everything safe and organized, and I can quickly edit or add items whenever I need to.

× However, if I'm just going out to buy a few items or specific.

✓ However, if I'm just going out to buy a few items or something specific.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper object after 'specific'. Adding 'something' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I usually make A to do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks.

✓ I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the noun phrase.

× This method really improves my productivity and ensures I delivered my work on time.

✓ This method really improves my productivity and ensures I deliver my work on time.

The verb 'delivered' is in past tense, but the sentence refers to a general truth or habitual action, so present tense 'deliver' is appropriate.

× it can be quite time consuming and tedious.

✓ it can be quite time-consuming and tedious.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or complement.

× they might find it difficult to organize their thoughts or feel that writing things down takes too much afford.

✓ they might find it difficult to organize their thoughts or feel that writing things down takes too much effort.

The word 'afford' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'effort' to express the amount of work required.

× Also when I use paper it can easily get them aged old last.

✓ Also, when I use paper, it can easily get old and worn out.

The phrase 'get them aged old last' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'get old and worn out' correctly describes paper deteriorating over time.