List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Используйте простые предложения и избегайте ошибок времени и словарных ошибок. Например, скажите: "Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need."

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

提案: Постарайтесь внимательно слушать вопрос и отвечать на него. Если не понимаете, можно попросить объяснить, но лучше попытаться ответить по смыслу. Например, можно сказать: "Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized."

例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

提案: Попробуйте понять вопрос и дать простой ответ, даже если не уверены. Например, можно сказать: "Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or prefer to remember things."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or think it takes too much time.

提案: Ответ должен быть более ясным и структурированным. Укажите предпочтение и объясните почему. Например: "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient, easy to edit, and I always have my phone with me.

× Hello in my opinion I had a list when I am going to show shop.

✓ Hello, in my opinion, I make a list when I go shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'had' (past tense) and 'am going to show shop' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct tense for habitual actions is present simple, so 'make' and 'go shopping' should be used. Also, 'show shop' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× Do you make a list? For you work, does it work? Excuse me, I don't understand your question.

✓ Do you make a list for your work? Does it work? Excuse me, I don't understand your question.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order, especially 'For you work' which should be 'for your work'. Correct word order and possessive pronoun usage are necessary for clarity.

× Excuse me, I don't understand these questions.

✓ Excuse me, I don't understand the questions.

The phrase 'these questions' is less appropriate here; 'the questions' is more natural in this context. Also, the sentence is correct but can be improved for clarity and naturalness.

× In my opinion I had a list and I think at least more better and very useful form for work.

✓ In my opinion, I make a list, and I think it is better and very useful for work.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'had' (past tense) instead of present tense 'make' for habitual action. Also, 'more better' is incorrect; 'better' alone is the correct comparative form. The phrase 'at least' is unnecessary and confusing here.