List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'any kind of grocery shopping at any kind of clothing shopping'. Instead, directly state your habit and add a reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping, whether it's for groceries or clothes, because it helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Scandis education' and 'list of works'. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me remember tasks easily. For example, during my studies, I write down assignments to ensure I complete them on time.

提案: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to express your idea more naturally and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your points and be specific about why some people avoid traditional lists.

例: I think some people don't like making lists on paper because they prefer using their smartphones, which are more convenient and easy to update anytime.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better flow. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'too busy in my Akademik studies'. Be clear and concise.

例: To be honest, I used to make lists on paper when I was in 12th grade. However, now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and helps me remember everything easily.

× Well, yes, I usually make the list when I'm going for the shopping.

✓ Well, yes, I usually make a list when I'm going shopping.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list' and 'shopping'. Since the list is not specific, 'a' should be used. Also, 'going for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going shopping'.

× I like any kind of grocery shopping at any kind of clothing shopping.

✓ I like any kind of grocery shopping and any kind of clothing shopping.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used here. To connect two types of shopping, 'and' is appropriate. Also, 'clothing shopping' is a noun phrase and does not require a preposition here.

× Well, honestly saying when I am in my Scandis education, I usually make the list of works, an nowadays I usually prefer to make a list to do work.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, when I am in my Scandis education, I usually make a list of work, and nowadays I usually prefer to make a list to do work.

The phrase 'honestly saying' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'honestly speaking'. 'The list of works' should be 'a list of work' because 'work' is uncountable here. 'An' is a typo and should be 'and'.

× So I can remember easy to do any kind of or any sort of work.

✓ So I can easily remember to do any kind or any sort of work.

The adverb 'easily' should be used instead of the adjective 'easy' to modify the verb 'remember'. Also, 'any kind of or any sort of work' is redundant; 'any kind or any sort of work' is better.

× And I think yes, it works a lot for me.

✓ And I think yes, it works a lot for me.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I believe that people are now they have their cell phones, so they usually make the list on their cell phones.

✓ I believe that people now have their cell phones, so they usually make lists on their cell phones.

The phrase 'people are now they have' is incorrect; it should be 'people now have'. Also, 'make the list' should be 'make lists' as it refers to lists in general.

× So they don't prefer to make list on our notes on any kind of book and the node spoke.

✓ So they don't prefer to make lists on notes or any kind of book or notebook.

'Make list' should be 'make lists'. 'Our notes' is incorrect; it should be 'notes'. 'The node spoke' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'notebook'.

× So they usually prefer to do right on their cell phone to buy something or to do any sort of work.

✓ So they usually prefer to write on their cell phones to buy something or to do any sort of work.

'Do right' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write'. Also, 'cell phone' should be plural 'cell phones' to match the plural subject 'they'.

× Up to be honest, when I was in my 12th standard, I usually prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ To be honest, when I was in my 12th standard, I usually preferred to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'Up to be honest' is incorrect; it should be 'To be honest'. Also, since the time referred is past, 'prefer' should be 'preferred'.

× But nowadays I'm too busy in my Akademik studies so I usually prefer to make a list on my cell phone as it is too convenient for me and it is easier way to remember each and everything.

✓ But nowadays I'm too busy with my academic studies, so I usually prefer to make a list on my cell phone as it is very convenient for me and it is an easier way to remember everything.

'Busy in' should be 'busy with'. 'Akademik' is a misspelling of 'academic'. 'Too convenient' is better as 'very convenient'. 'Easier way' needs the article 'an'. 'Each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices.