List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very brief and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a reason or example to support your answer. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.'

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Focus on giving a clear response about whether you make lists for work and if they are effective. Use simple, complete sentences and explain briefly. For example, 'Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks on time.'

例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not clearly explain why some people dislike making lists. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.'

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things naturally.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear preference and explain why. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit them.'

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit them.

× Yes, make a list when a shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has an incorrect article 'a' before 'shop'. The correct sentence includes the subject 'I' and removes the article to properly express the action. Always include the subject and use correct articles for clarity.

× Let's make a list for you for my work. And. Believe it. Marry my cousin. To work.

✓ I make a list for my work. I believe it helps me to work better.

The original response is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence provides a clear and complete response relevant to the question. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure the response is coherent and related to the question.

× Yes, some people like not make English time their time wished. And. Improve the list.

✓ Yes, some people do not like to make lists because they prefer to use their time differently. Also, they want to improve their list-making skills.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correction uses proper conjunctions and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning. Use appropriate conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.

× Just prefer to make list on my your phone. And my favorite?

✓ I just prefer to make a list on my phone. It's my favorite method.

The original sentence misses the article 'a' before 'list' and incorrectly uses 'my your phone'. The correction adds the article and corrects the possessive pronoun. Use correct articles and possessive pronouns to avoid confusion.