List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些重复。建议使用更自然的句式，避免语法错误，并且简洁明了地表达观点。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. Otherwise, I might forget important items and regret it later.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚地说明使用清单的习惯和效果。

例: Yes, I use a to-do list app on my phone. Every night before sleeping, I write down tasks for the next day to make sure I don't forget anything important. It really helps me stay organized.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and 'wing it'. They don't like following a strict schedule every day, which is not necessarily a bad approach.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚说明偏好及原因。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because advanced apps can remind me at specific times. This helps me remember tasks better than writing on paper, which is easy to forget.

× Yes I do because I think making a list can remind me which should I buy otherwise I will forgot something I need to and I will be so regretful when I get home.

✓ Yes, I do because I think making a list can remind me what I should buy; otherwise, I will forget something I need, and I will be so regretful when I get home.

The sentence has incorrect word order in the embedded question 'which should I buy' which should be 'what I should buy' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget'. The sentence also needs proper punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, I do any dust work.

✓ Yes, I do any dusting work.

The phrase 'any dust work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'dusting work' where 'dusting' is the present participle used as a noun. 'Dust' alone is a noun, but here the activity is meant.

× I install A to do List app on my phone and every night before I went to sleep I would take a note on To Do List about what will I do next day so I won't forget some important things.

✓ I installed a To Do List app on my phone, and every night before I go to sleep, I take a note on the To Do List about what I will do the next day so I won't forget some important things.

The verb tense is inconsistent: 'install' should be past tense 'installed' because it happened before. 'Went' should be present tense 'go' to match habitual action. The phrase 'take a note on' is acceptable but 'take a note in' or 'write a note on' might be better. Also, 'what will I do next day' should be 'what I will do the next day' for correct word order and article usage.

× Ann is. Play a very important.

✓ It plays a very important role.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Ann is. Play a very important.' is not a complete sentence. The intended meaning seems to be that 'It plays a very important role.' which is a complete and correct sentence.

× I guess they like wing it and they're very spontaneous.

✓ I guess they like to wing it and they're very spontaneous.

The phrase 'like wing it' is incorrect; the verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to wing it' or the gerund 'winging it'. Here, 'like to wing it' is more natural.

× It will need to make a very detail, an exact schedule of what will they do every day.

✓ They will need to make a very detailed, exact schedule of what they will do every day.

'Detail' is a noun; the adjective form 'detailed' is needed to describe 'schedule'. Also, the word order in the embedded question 'what will they do' should be 'what they will do' in this statement. The subject 'they' is missing at the start.

× Actually, I don't think it is a bad thing. In re versus account football way to deal with things.

✓ Actually, I don't think it is a bad thing. It's a more spontaneous way to deal with things.

The second sentence is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is probably 'It's a more spontaneous way to deal with things.' which is grammatically correct and makes sense.

× I prefer Mega Listen phone because I'm currently some advanced app will have a function of reminding you to do something on exact time.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because some advanced apps have a function to remind you to do something at an exact time.

'Mega Listen phone' is unclear; likely 'making lists on my phone' is intended. 'I'm currently some advanced app will have' is incorrect; it should be 'some advanced apps have'. Also, 'on exact time' should be 'at an exact time'.

× So you can stack the time what you want to make the app to remind you and then you want to forget.

✓ So you can set the time when you want the app to remind you, and then you won't forget.

'Stack the time what you want to make the app to remind you' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'set the time when you want the app to remind you'. Also, 'then you want to forget' should be 'then you won't forget'.

× But if you just write on paper is forgettable.

✓ But if you just write it on paper, it is forgettable.

The sentence lacks the object pronoun 'it' after 'write'. Also, 'is forgettable' is acceptable but 'it is easy to forget' might be more natural.