List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You dey use 'less' instead of 'list' wey be small mistake wey fit confuse. Try dey use correct word and avoid repeating 'helps me' too much. Also, try to make your answer more natural and concise by combining ideas.

例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy, stay within my budget, and shop more efficiently.

提案: Again, you dey use 'less' instead of 'list'. Also, try to avoid short, incomplete sentences like 'So.' Connect your ideas smoothly using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized by listing my tasks in order of priority, so I can work more effectively and efficiently.

提案: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Also, watch your grammar, for example, 'everything will written down' should be 'everything is written down'.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it adds pressure when they see unfinished tasks, and they feel it takes too much time to write everything down.

提案: Try to use 'prefer' instead of 'rather' in this context. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences like 'and it.' Connect your ideas smoothly and check your verb tenses for consistency.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can easily check my notes and set reminders for different activities.

× Yes, I love making less before I shop.

✓ Yes, I love making lists before I shop.

The word 'less' is incorrect here because it is used for uncountable nouns. The correct plural form 'lists' should be used since the speaker refers to multiple items to remember.

× I usually make less for my work 'cause it helps me to stay organized because I'm able to list all that I have to do that day in order of priority.

✓ I usually make lists for my work 'cause it helps me to stay organized because I'm able to list all that I have to do that day in order of priority.

Again, 'less' is incorrect for countable nouns. The plural 'lists' is appropriate when referring to multiple items or tasks.

× So. It helps me work more effectively and efficiently.

✓ So, it helps me work more effectively and efficiently.

The sentence is incorrectly split with a period after 'So'. It should be connected with a comma to form a complete sentence.

× I think this is because it sort of adds pressure having a list and everything will written down and then seeing that they haven't completed anything, you can add a little bit of pressure and they feel it takes time to write all these things down so.

✓ I think this is because having a list and everything written down sort of adds pressure, and then seeing that they haven't completed anything can add a little bit of pressure, and they feel it takes time to write all these things down.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms ('will written' should be 'written'). Also, the sentence should be connected properly without abrupt stops.

× I think this is some of the reasons.

✓ I think these are some of the reasons.

'This' is singular and does not agree with the plural 'reasons'. 'These' is the correct plural demonstrative pronoun to match 'reasons'.

× I rather make a list on my phone because I'm always with my phone and I can easily refer to my notes when I need to remember something.

✓ I would rather make a list on my phone because I'm always with my phone and I can easily refer to my notes when I need to remember something.

The modal verb 'would' is needed with 'rather' to express preference correctly.

× Also I could set reminders for different activities on my phone and it. Always remind me.

✓ Also, I can set reminders for different activities on my phone and it always reminds me.

The sentence is split incorrectly with a period after 'it'. Also, 'could' suggests possibility rather than ability; 'can' is better here. The verb 'remind' should be in third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with 'it'.