List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复，句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: I didn't use to make a shopping list, so I often forgot what to buy. But now, I always prepare a list beforehand, which helps me remember everything I need. I think it's a very useful habit.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. Although I didn't do this for shopping before, making a list helps me plan my tasks and manage my time better, which improves my efficiency.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have many tasks to manage. They may feel it's unnecessary to plan their work in detail.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子断裂且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达个人观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I believe it depends on personal preference. For me, writing lists on paper is more effective because it helps me remember better. However, some people might prefer using their phones for convenience.

× A long time ago, I didn't really make a list before I go to shopping, so I usually forget what do I have to buy in a shopping period.

✓ A long time ago, I didn't really make a list before I went shopping, so I usually forgot what I had to buy during shopping.

句子中描述过去的动作，动词时态应使用过去式。'go to shopping' 应改为 'went shopping'，'forget' 应改为过去式 'forgot'，'do I have to buy' 语序错误，应改为 'I had to buy'。

× A long time ago, I didn't really make a list before I go to shopping, so I usually forget what do I have to buy in a shopping period.

✓ A long time ago, I didn't really make a list before I went shopping, so I usually forgot what I had to buy during shopping.

'go to shopping' 中 'to' 是多余的，正确表达是 'go shopping'。另外，'in a shopping period' 不自然，改为 'during shopping' 更合适。

× So after that I usually make a schedule or make a list before I go to shopping.

✓ So after that I usually make a schedule or make a list before I go shopping.

'go to shopping' 中 'to' 不应出现，正确用法是 'go shopping'，这是固定搭配。

× So that will make me to remember some things I have to buy.

✓ So that will help me remember some things I have to buy.

'make me to remember' 中 'to' 不应出现，动词 'make' 后接动词原形，且此处用 'help me remember' 更自然。

× It's gonna sounds like a little bit of weird, but I didn't do a list before I go to shopping.

✓ It's gonna sound a little bit weird, but I didn't make a list before I went shopping.

'sounds' 应为原形 'sound' 因为前面有助动词 'gonna'，'do a list' 应改为 'make a list'，'go to shopping' 应改为 'went shopping'。

× I usually do a list before my work because.

✓ I usually make a list before my work because it can help me schedule or plan the dates for my work and make me more effective.

句子不完整，缺少原因部分。'do a list' 应改为 'make a list'，'schedule or to planning' 应统一为动词原形 'schedule or plan'。

× It can help me to schedule or to planning the date for my work and make me more effective in my work.

✓ It can help me schedule or plan the dates for my work and make me more effective at my work.

'help me to schedule or to planning' 中 'to planning' 错误，应为动词原形 'plan'。'effective in my work' 更常用表达是 'effective at my work'。

× I don't know, but I guess probably they don't have too many works to do so that they don't need to making a list.

✓ I don't know, but I guess probably they don't have too much work to do so they don't need to make a list.

'works' 作为不可数名词应为 'work'，'too many' 用于可数名词，'too much' 用于不可数名词。'need to making' 应为 'need to make'。

× But for me, I think that's a really good habit to making a list.

✓ But for me, I think that's a really good habit to make a list.

'to making' 应为不定式 'to make'，不定式后接动词原形。

× An I don't know some of the people they may think it's not necessary to making lists for their work.

✓ And I don't know, some people may think it's not necessary to make lists for their work.

'An' 应为 'And'，'some of the people they' 冗余，改为 'some people'。'to making' 应为 'to make'。

× Because they don't have too many date to schedule.

✓ Because they don't have too many dates to schedule.

'date' 应为复数 'dates'，因为 'too many' 用于可数名词复数。

× I think making a list and paper is more efficient.

✓ I think making a list on paper is more efficient.

'making a list and paper' 语义不通，应为 'making a list on paper'，表示在纸上做清单。

× And I think if you have the conditions too. Write on the paper.

✓ And I think if you have the conditions too, writing on paper is better.

句子断裂，'Write on the paper' 应改为动名词短语 'writing on paper'，并与前句合并。

× I think that's going to work more. For some people.

✓ I think that's going to work better for some people.

句子断裂，'work more' 不自然，应为 'work better'，并合并为一句完整句子。