List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习简单句的结构，避免重复和无意义的词汇，提升表达的清晰度。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I try to remember what I need and buy it directly in the store.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但存在语法错误和重复，建议注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me clearly see what tasks I have completed and what still needs to be done.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法和词汇错误较多，建议多练习表达原因时的句型，使用完整且连贯的句子。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their head, which helps them feel more flexible.

提案: 表达有一定逻辑，但语法和词汇使用不准确，建议加强环境相关词汇的学习，注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and environmentally friendly compared to using paper.

× I. Open just. Memorize it in my head under the go to the shop and the see something CCCO and the bear one.

✓ I just memorize it in my head when I go to the shop and see something I need and buy one.

句中使用了不正确的动词形式“Open”和“under the go”，应使用动词原形或正确的短语。这里应使用一般现在时的动词形式，且表达应连贯。建议使用“when I go to the shop and see”来表达动作的时间和顺序。

× maybe this people. Prefer to memorize the. The. Sing the world. Get to in their head and maybe it makes them. Remember it?

✓ maybe these people prefer to memorize the things in their head and maybe it helps them remember it.

“this people”应为“these people”，因为people是复数，指示代词应使用复数形式“these”。另外，句子中“Sing the world. Get to”无意义，应改为“things”。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Well, I prefer to make list on my phone 'cause paper, you know, it's not not environment or well. Friendly and on my phone it is more convenient to for me to check it.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because paper, you know, is not environmentally friendly, and on my phone it is more convenient for me to check it.

“make list”缺少冠词，应为“make a list”。“not not environment or well. Friendly”表达不正确，应为“not environmentally friendly”。此外，“to for me to check it”中“to”多余，应去掉。整体句子需调整以符合英语表达习惯。

× And it makes me, it makes it clear, more clearer to see what I've done and what I haven't done so far.

✓ And it makes it clearer to see what I've done and what I haven't done so far.

“more clearer”是重复比较级，比较级“clearer”已经包含“more”的意思，不能同时使用。应使用“clearer”单独作为比较级。

× I. Open just. Memorize it in my head under the go to the shop and the see something CCCO and the bear one.

✓ I just memorize it in my head when I go to the shop and see something I need and buy one.

“under the go to the shop”中的“under”使用错误，正确表达应为“when I go to the shop”，表示时间状语。预设介词使用错误导致句意不明。