List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和断句错误，确保表达清晰。

例: Yes, I have recently started making shopping lists because I often forget to buy some items when I shop.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达重复问题，连接词使用不当。建议使用更自然的表达和恰当的连接词，使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I have been making lists for my work since college to manage my time effectively. For example, I prioritize assignments and projects based on their deadlines.

提案: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，重复使用“for instance, for example”。建议简化句子，避免重复，逻辑更清晰。

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because unexpected events can change their plans, making the list less useful.

提案: 回答表达较为清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意时态一致，使用更准确的词汇。

例: I used to make lists in my diary, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to carry a notebook everywhere.

× Yes, I currently started to make a list sayings.

✓ Yes, I currently started making a list.

动词start后面接动名词形式making，而不是不定式to make或其他形式。这里应使用动名词形式。

× I found I easily to forget to.

✓ I found I easily forget.

句子结构不完整且多余to，应该去掉to，且forget后面缺少宾语，建议简化为I found I easily forget。

× Home the stuff I want to buy in a shopping basket.

✓ I put the stuff I want to buy in a shopping basket at home.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子结构不完整，需补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× Yes, since I was a college student I started to make a list for my work like a schedule.

✓ Yes, since I was a college student, I have started to make a list for my work like a schedule.

since引导的时间状语从句表示从过去某时开始持续到现在，主句应使用现在完成时。

× Because I need to spare my time.

✓ Because I need to spare time.

spare time是固定搭配，不需要加my。

× For example like for example which time I need to do my assignment first or do my another project?

✓ For example, which task I need to do first, my assignment or another project?

重复使用for example且句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，需简化并调整代词。

× In my opinion. Sometimes you can't control while the next step.

✓ In my opinion, sometimes you can't control the next step.

原句断句错误，while用法不当，句子不完整，需调整为完整句子。

× Maybe my today's schedule is I will do my homework after the class but then maybe my friends will ask me out have a dinner scatter so some people they don't like to making a list.

✓ Maybe today's schedule is that I will do my homework after class, but then maybe my friends will ask me out to have dinner, so some people don't like making a list.

介词和短语使用错误，如ask me out to have dinner，且making前不需要to。

× so some people they don't like to making a list.

✓ so some people don't like making a list.

主语重复，some people和they不能同时出现。

× In the past I always make a list on my diary.

✓ In the past, I always made a list in my diary.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时made，且搭配in my diary更合适。

× However. When I use my electromobile more often, I found a quite convenient for me to make a list on my phone so I don't need to bring my book everywhere to make sure I follow list.

✓ However, when I use my electric vehicle more often, I found it quite convenient to make a list on my phone, so I don't need to bring my book everywhere to make sure I follow the list.

preposition和冠词使用错误，a quite convenient应为it quite convenient，follow list前需加the。