List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often buy only one item, like fruit. Therefore, making a list is not necessary for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和语法，简洁表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. Making a list helps me finish each task one by one efficiently.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think many people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome. They prefer to follow their feelings and do things spontaneously.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化表达，使用连贯的句子，并准确表达个人喜好。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing. It makes me feel more comfortable and organized compared to using my phone.

× I truly love to making a list when I working becaused there are several things for me to work out in the future so I must to make a list to make sure I can finish the work one by one an complete them entirely so.

✓ I truly love making a list when I work because there are several things for me to work out in the future so I must make a list to make sure I can finish the work one by one and complete them entirely.

动词后面接动名词时，不能用不定式to+动词ing形式，应该直接用动名词making。同时，'when I working'中，动词work应使用原形work，因为when引导的时间状语从句中需要用一般现在时。'becaused'是错误拼写，应为because。'must to make'中must后面不加to，直接用动词原形。'an complete'应为'and complete'。这些都是动词形式和拼写错误。

× In my opinion I reckon all most people would doesn't like to make a list becaused they feel trouble and they would like to do the things from their own heart and just follow their heart to deal with anything.

✓ In my opinion I reckon almost all people would not like to make a list because they feel troubled and they would like to do things from their own heart and just follow their heart to deal with anything.

'all most'应为'almost all'，表示几乎所有。'would doesn't like'中，助动词would后面动词用原形，否定用would not，不能用doesn't。'becaused'拼写错误，应为because。'feel trouble'应为'feel troubled'，因为这里需要形容词。'do the things'中'the'不合适，应去掉。

× Not really often 'cause I just go shopping that I just need to buy one thing.

✓ Not really often because I just go shopping when I need to buy one thing.

'that'用法错误，应该用时间状语从句连接词'when'，表示“当我需要买一件东西时”。

× So it's definitely not a necessary thing for me to make a list in purchasing some things, for example, the fruit.

✓ So it's definitely not necessary for me to make a list when purchasing some things, for example, fruit.

'in purchasing'用法不当，应该用when引导时间状语从句。'the fruit'中水果作为不可数名词，前面不加定冠词。

× As for me, I would like to make a list on paper rather than a phone, 'cause I am. Big fan, love writing thing and I reckon writing things can let me feel more comfortable and stable, so it's a good thing for me to make a list on paper.

✓ As for me, I would like to make a list on paper rather than on a phone, because I am a big fan and love writing things. I reckon writing things can make me feel more comfortable and stable, so it's a good thing for me to make a list on paper.

'rather than a phone'应为'rather than on a phone'，介词缺失。'I am. Big fan'句子不完整，缺少冠词'a'和连接词'and'。'love writing thing'应为'writing things'，复数形式。'can let me feel'表达不自然，改为'can make me feel'更合适。