List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I buy vegetables and food. However, if I go to the store quickly, I sometimes don't make a list because I don't have much time.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用具体例子说明清单如何帮助工作效率。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me organize tasks one by one clearly, which improves my efficiency and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议用简单明了的句子表达原因，并举例说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously without planning. They may find making lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复词汇。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to shop and buy vegetable and food.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go shopping and buy vegetables and food.

这里“vegetable”应使用复数形式“vegetables”，因为指的是多种蔬菜。动词短语“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，这是固定搭配。

× But sometimes if I directly go to store quickly I don't make the list because I don't have many time.

✓ But sometimes if I go directly to the store quickly, I don't make the list because I don't have much time.

“go to store”应加定冠词“the”，变为“go to the store”。“many time”应改为“much time”，因为“time”是不可数名词。副词“directly”位置应放在动词前。

× Yes, I always make a list for my work. Firstly, second the third family 1 by 1 because it's making me clearly do everything I need to do and.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. Firstly, secondly, thirdly, I do things one by one because it helps me clearly do everything I need to do.

“firstly, second the third family 1 by 1”表达不清，应改为“Firstly, secondly, thirdly, I do things one by one”。“family”用词错误，应删除。

× Make my work the more in viciously and it's very, very good because it.

✓ It makes my work more efficient and it's very, very good because of that.

“the more in viciously”表达错误，应改为“more efficient”。“make”应改为“It makes”，使句子完整。

× Because many people don't don't have this however behavior because the directly go shopping and don't think him anything so.

✓ Because many people don't have this habit; they directly go shopping and don't think about anything.

“don't don't”重复，应去掉一个。“however behavior”用词错误，应改为“habit”。“the directly go”中“the”错误，应去掉。“don't think him anything”应改为“don't think about anything”。

× And for many people, make a list NASA behavior.

✓ And for many people, making a list is not a habit.

“make a list NASA behavior”表达错误，应改为“making a list is not a habit”。“NASA”应为“not a”。

× I prefer make a list on my phone because I think it's easy easy to. To remember and the I always take my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to remember and I always carry my phone.

“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”。“easy easy to.”重复且断句错误，应改为“easy to remember”。“take my phone”应改为“carry my phone”。

× So it's a very convenient. And the take by the GBI phone is very convenient.

✓ So it's very convenient. And taking the phone with me is very convenient.

“a very convenient”中“convenient”是形容词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。“the take by the GBI phone”表达不清，应改为“taking the phone with me”。