List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えが不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。短くても良いので、直接質問に答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"No, I don't usually make a list because I prefer to shop freely without planning." のように簡潔に答えることが大切です。

例: No, I don't usually make a list because I prefer to shop freely without planning. It helps me enjoy browsing and discovering new things.

提案: 答えは質問に答えていますが、文が断片的でつながりが弱いです。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然な流れにしましょう。例えば、"I usually make a list for my work because it helps me finish tasks smoothly and quickly." のように。

例: I usually make a list for my work because it helps me finish tasks smoothly and quickly. When I follow my list, I can manage my time better and avoid forgetting important things.

提案: 答えが不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べましょう。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they prefer to act spontaneously." のように。

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they prefer to act spontaneously. They might find lists restrictive or unnecessary.

提案: 答えは質問に答えていますが、文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文をつなげて自然な答えにしましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's faster and easier to check than paper." のように。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's faster and easier to check than paper. Also, I can edit my list anytime without wasting paper.

× Personally, I did not.

✓ Personally, I did not.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× Because it's.

✓ Because I'm too lazy to make a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. It should be a complete sentence explaining the reason, such as 'Because I'm too lazy to make a list.'

× In I like to shopping without think anything.

✓ I like to shop without thinking about anything.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base form 'to shop' or the gerund 'shopping'. Also, 'think' should be in the gerund form 'thinking' after 'without'.

× Just looking.

✓ I just look.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. 'I just look' is a complete sentence.

× I usually make a list for my work.

✓ I usually make a list for my work.

This sentence is correct in present tense; no correction needed.

× I am. I am currently studying. At school. In.

✓ I am currently studying at school.

The original is fragmented. Combining into one sentence with proper word order is necessary.

× The things goes.

✓ The things go.

'Things' is plural, so the verb should be 'go' not 'goes'.

× they doesn't take a long time to finish my work.

✓ they don't take a long time to finish my work.

'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'.

× So I prefer.

✓ So I prefer that.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs an object or continuation to be complete.

× I think because it's take it takes time to make a list in.

✓ I think it's because it takes time to make a list.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words. Correct modal verb usage and word order is needed.

× Some of them like to do something without thinking anything make not making list in.

✓ Some of them like to do things without thinking and do not make a list.

The original sentence is confusing and fragmented; it needs restructuring for clarity and grammar.

× Oh my.

✓ Oh my.

This interjection is acceptable as is; no correction needed.

× I preferred to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The question is about current preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of past tense 'preferred'.

× Because it is easy to look it up and I could look it up.

✓ Because it is easy to look up and I can look it up.

The phrase 'look it up' should not have 'to' between 'look' and 'it up'. Also, 'could' implies past ability; 'can' is better for present ability.

× Faster dumb paper and.

✓ Faster than paper, and

The phrase is incomplete and contains a typo 'dumb' instead of 'than'. It should be 'faster than paper'.

× A. Making a list on paper it takes time.

✓ Making a list on paper takes time.

The sentence is fragmented and has unnecessary words; it should be concise and clear.

× So I prefer to use.

✓ So I prefer to use my phone.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs an object to complete the meaning.