List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更完整和连贯的句子，并避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以尝试用更清晰的结构表达你的观点。

例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer buying things online. When I go to a shopping center, I tend to browse freely without a specific purpose.

提案: 你的回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting my work each day. It helps me stay organized and improves my productivity.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，表达原因时用更准确的词汇和连接词。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful to follow a strict plan. They prefer to do things more casually and flexibly.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不准确的地方，建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，避免表达混乱。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I can check my to-do list anytime and anywhere without carrying paper. For example, when I go to the shopping center, I often forget my paper list.

× So when it comes to shopping center I always just mindlessly. Browse freely in the shops.

✓ So when it comes to shopping centers, I always just mindlessly browse freely in the shops.

这里的动词browse不应该分开成两个句子，且shopping center应为复数形式。动词browse应直接跟在副词mindlessly后面，构成动词短语。

× So when it comes to shopping center I always just mindlessly. Browse freely in the shops.

✓ So when it comes to shopping centers, I always just mindlessly browse freely in the shops.

shopping center应使用复数形式shopping centers，因为这里泛指多个购物中心。

× Yes, I'm the kind of person that will can leave cook handily result of. Lease and so I will do A to do list before I started my work for the for the day for over a week and I think its function well for me 'cause it really has my productivity and efficiency.

✓ Yes, I'm the kind of person who can cook handily. Also, I will make a to-do list before I start my work for the day. I've been doing this for over a week and I think it functions well for me because it really improves my productivity and efficiency.

原句结构混乱，存在多处语法错误和词语拼写错误。需要重组句子，使其语义清晰，时态一致，且表达准确。

× I will do A to do list before I started my work for the for the day for over a week and I think its function well for me 'cause it really has my productivity and efficiency.

✓ I will make a to-do list before I start my work for the day. I've been doing this for over a week and I think it functions well for me because it really improves my productivity and efficiency.

时态使用不当，前后时态不一致。应使用一般现在时描述习惯动作，完成时描述持续时间。

× I think its function well for me 'cause it really has my productivity and efficiency.

✓ I think it functions well for me because it really improves my productivity and efficiency.

its应为it，function应为动词functions，has用法错误，应改为improves。代词和动词形式需正确匹配。

× Well, I think that the cause for some people making the least and sometimes can be an extra burden, say.

✓ Well, I think that the cause for some people not making lists is that it can sometimes be an extra burden.

least应为lists，且句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× They may feel stressed out when they have to stick into a least and so they prefer to do things in a more caraway.

✓ They may feel stressed out when they have to stick to a list, so they prefer to do things in a more carefree way.

stick into应为stick to，caraway应为carefree way，介词和词语拼写错误。

× I always say I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause it's very convenient.

✓ I always say I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient.

'cause为口语缩写，正式书面语中应使用because。

× For example, when I cook the shopping center, I definitely will forget soup carrying my list paper.

✓ For example, when I go to the shopping center, I definitely will forget to bring my list paper.

cook the shopping center不合适，应为go to the shopping center；forget soup carrying应为forget to bring，介词和动词搭配错误。