List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了原因，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复和语法错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need to buy at the supermarket. Making a list helps me remember everything and shop more efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且明确说明列表的作用和效果。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have several tasks to complete each day. I prioritize the most urgent and important tasks at the top, which helps me manage my time effectively.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用连贯的连接词。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed when they see all the tasks they have to do. This can make them anxious and stressed.

提案: 回答中断断续续，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清楚说明偏好和原因，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer to write my lists on sticky notes and stick them on my computer because I find it more convenient than using my phone.

× I often forgot what I'm gonna buy one in supermarket so I tend to make a list before I went there.

✓ I often forget what I'm going to buy in the supermarket, so I tend to make a list before I go there.

这里使用了过去时态“forgot”和“went”，但句子描述的是经常发生的事情，应该使用一般现在时。"forgot"应改为"forget"，"went"应改为"go"。另外，“gonna”是口语缩写，正式写作应为"going to"。

× I often forgot what I'm gonna buy one in supermarket so I tend to make a list before I went there.

✓ I often forget what I'm going to buy in the supermarket, so I tend to make a list before I go there.

句中“one”使用不当，应去掉，因为“one”在这里没有必要，且“supermarket”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I have several task to complete every day, so I prioritize most urgent and important task on the top of list.

✓ I have several tasks to complete every day, so I prioritize the most urgent and important tasks at the top of the list.

“task”应使用复数形式“tasks”，因为前面有“several”表示多个任务。

× I prioritize most urgent and important task on the top of list.

✓ I prioritize the most urgent and important tasks at the top of the list.

“most urgent and important task”前应加定冠词“the”，且“task”应为复数“tasks”。“on the top of list”应改为“at the top of the list”，需要加定冠词“the”。

× But I also write down the last.

✓ But I also write down the last one.

“the last”后面缺少名词，应该补充“one”表示最后一项。

× Maybe some people just feel overwhelmed once they write down all the task on list, which remind me.

✓ Maybe some people just feel overwhelmed once they write down all the tasks on the list, which reminds me.

“all the task”应为复数“all the tasks”，且“on list”应为“on the list”。“which remind me”主语是单数“which”，动词应为“reminds”。

× Maybe some people just feel overwhelmed once they write down all the task on list, which remind me.

✓ Maybe some people just feel overwhelmed once they write down all the tasks on the list, which reminds me.

“on list”缺少定冠词，应为“on the list”。

× which remind me. Remind them how much they need to complicate that can be anxious.

✓ which reminds me. It reminds them how complicated it can be and cause anxiety.

“which remind me”动词应为“reminds”，且后半句表达不清，“how much they need to complicate that can be anxious”语法错误，应改为“how complicated it can be and cause anxiety”。

× I prefer write down list on this post down. Notes.

✓ I prefer to write down the list on these post-it notes.

“prefer write down”缺少不定式“to”，应为“prefer to write down”。“on this post down. Notes.”表达不正确，应为“on these post-it notes”。

× I prefer write down list on this post down. Notes.

✓ I prefer to write down the list on these post-it notes.

“list”前应加定冠词“the”，且“Notes”应与“post”连写为“post-it notes”，且为复数。

× I found this more convenient than tracking my phone.

✓ I find this more convenient than tracking on my phone.

“tracking my phone”表达不准确，应为“tracking on my phone”或更自然的表达“using my phone”。