List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go shopping, especially on weekends. This helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use clear and concise sentences with appropriate linking words to explain why making lists is effective for your work.

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks. It definitely works because I have many things to complete before finishing my day, so writing them down helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget anything.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some unclear expressions. Try to avoid negative assumptions like 'lazy' and instead provide more balanced reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they feel confident in remembering their tasks. Additionally, some might find making lists time-consuming, so they choose to rely on memory instead.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences and unclear words. Try to give a direct answer with clear reasons, using linking words to explain your preference between paper and phone lists.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is quicker and clearer for me. Also, I find it easier to review and tick off items on paper than on my phone.

× I usually have a shopping.

✓ I usually do some shopping.

The word 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Instead, use 'do some shopping' to express the activity correctly.

× 'Cause I would easily forgot.

✓ 'Cause I would easily forget.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'would' the base form 'forget' should be used to form the conditional mood correctly.

× Usually I shall fall grocery like, uh.

✓ Usually I shall buy groceries, like, uh.

The word 'grocery' is singular and usually refers to a store; the plural 'groceries' refers to items bought. Also, 'fall' is incorrect here; 'buy' is the appropriate verb.

× I have so many work items I got I have to finish before I off get off my work.

✓ I have so many work items I have to finish before I get off work.

The phrase 'I off get off my work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I get off work'. Also, 'work items' is acceptable, but the sentence structure needed correction for clarity.

× So I need to write down at least to remind myself what items I have to finish.

✓ So I need to write them down at least to remind myself what items I have to finish.

The verb 'write down' requires an object; adding 'them' clarifies what is being written down.

× Well, I guess they're lazy or the quite confident in the in memorizing.

✓ Well, I guess they're lazy or quite confident in memorizing.

The phrase 'the quite confident' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed to correctly modify 'quite confident'.

× So some of them may not write down, but I'm not that person, so I'm going to write down.

✓ So some of them may not write things down, but I'm not that person, so I'm going to write things down.

The verb 'write down' requires an object; adding 'things' clarifies what is being written down.

× Wow, prefer. Megalis or the paper 'cause it may be quick I feel quite clear and easy to understand an.

✓ Wow, I prefer my phone or the paper because it may be quicker; I feel it's quite clear and easy to understand.

The sentence had unclear wording and missing subjects. 'Megalis' is unclear and replaced with 'my phone'. 'Quick' should be 'quicker' to compare. Added missing subjects and conjunctions for clarity.

× In more easy for me to assess or. Lucy, the paper just the form of easily.

✓ It's easier for me to access or use the paper because it's just easier to handle.

The original sentence was fragmented and unclear. 'In more easy' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative adjective. 'Assess' is likely a mishearing of 'access'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.