Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason or short example. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing. My friends often tell me I have a pleasant voice, which encourages me to sing more, especially at small gatherings.

提案: Be precise with tense and add a brief supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise and natural.

例: No, I have never had formal singing lessons, but at school we sometimes get singing homework in music class, so I practice there.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and correct word choice. Avoid awkward phrasing and give a specific example of when you might sing for them.

例: I don't have a single person in mind; I usually sing for my family and close friends, for example at birthday gatherings or family dinners.

提案: Correct vocabulary and grammar errors, and use linking words to connect ideas. Be careful with tense and word choice ('sing' not 'sin'). Keep it to one or two sentences with a reason.

例: Yes, I think singing can make people happy. For instance, when I sing I feel relaxed and uplifted, which improves my mood.

提案: Use natural phrasing and correct prepositions. Avoid repetition and give a specific reason or example using a linking word.

例: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing. Although some singers may not be very skilled, I still appreciate their performance and effort.

提案: Clarify meaning with correct grammar and tense. State directly whether you took classes and then give a supporting detail about school practice, using linking words for coherence.

例: No, I haven't taken formal singing classes, but we do have singing practice in music lessons at school, and the teacher often assigns singing homework.

× Yes, I like singing because my friend always tell me that I have a beautiful voice.

✓ Yes, I like singing because my friend always tells me that I have a beautiful voice.

The subject 'my friend' is third person singular, so the verb should take an -s in present simple ('tell' -> 'tells'). Suggestion: when the subject is he/she/it or a singular noun, add -s to the base verb in present simple.

× No, I have never learned how to sing, but at school we will have singing homework in the music class.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but at school we sometimes have singing homework in music class.

The first clause uses present perfect correctly for life experience. The second clause used 'will have' which suggests future; context implies a habitual or scheduled activity, so simple present ('have') is appropriate. Also 'in the music class' is more natural as 'in music class'. Suggestion: use simple present for regular or habitual school activities.

× I actually don't have the particular person to sing for, but I want to sing for my family and my friend that close to me.

✓ I actually don't have a particular person to sing for, but I want to sing for my family and my friends who are close to me.

Use 'a particular person' (no 'the') and plural 'friends' matches 'family' and general desire. 'That close to me' should be 'who are close to me' because 'who' refers to people and 'are' agrees with plural 'friends'. Suggestion: use 'who' for people and ensure pronoun-verb agreement and correct article choice.

× I think sin can bring happiness to people, especially for me because when I'm was singing I feel really happy and relaxed.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially for me, because when I sing I feel really happy and relaxed.

'Sin' is a typo; should be 'singing'. The clause 'when I'm was singing' mixes present continuous and past; use simple present 'when I sing' for general truths. Also 'I feel' is correct in simple present to match. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual or general statements and correct typographical errors.

× Yes, I like to listen into other singing, although there there are some people's voices not very good, but I will to their performance.

✓ Yes, I like to listen to other people sing. Although some people's voices are not very good, I will still listen to their performances.

Use 'listen to' not 'listen into'. 'Other singing' is unnatural; use 'other people sing' or 'other people singing'. Remove duplicate 'there'. 'Some people's voices not very good' needs verb 'are'. 'I will to their performance' is missing verb and preposition; 'I will still listen to their performances' is natural. Suggestion: learn common verb-preposition collocations (listen to) and ensure sentences have verbs and correct subject-verb order.

× No, but I have singing practice lesson. In the music lesson, teacher will tell us to have a singing homework.

✓ No, but I have singing practice lessons. In music lessons, the teacher tells us to do singing homework.

'Singing practice lesson' should be plural or countable 'lessons' for regular activities. 'In the music lesson' is better as 'in music lessons' for generality. 'Teacher will tell us to have a singing homework' is ungrammatical: use definite article 'the teacher' and simple present 'tells' for habitual action; 'do singing homework' is natural and 'homework' is uncountable so no 'a'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual events, correct article use ('the teacher'), pluralize when referring to repeated sessions, and treat 'homework' as uncountable.