Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。避免不必要或错误词汇（如“win”应为“happy/relaxed”），并把句子控制在5句内。可先给主题句表明喜好，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词保持连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially pop music, because it helps me relax and lift my mood. For example, I sometimes go to KTV with friends and use singing apps to practice new songs and have fun together.

提案: 回答应更清晰直接，例如说明是否正式学过，并提供具体细节。注意语法（如否定表述和进行时态），使用连接词解释原因或补充说明。

例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I usually sing on my own because I find melodies catchy, and practicing alone helps me enjoy and improve my voice.

提案: 回答需更准确地表达对象（family / friends / best friend）并用正确时态。给出具体场景举例时，注意冠词和动词过去式（sung -> sang）。保持一到两句补充说明即可。

例: I like to sing for close people, such as my family and best friends. For example, last summer I sang at my best friend's wedding to celebrate their special day.

提案: 回答要简洁、有逻辑，避免重复与不恰当词汇（如“tour”）。先给肯定主题句，再用一两句具体原因支持，使用连接词如 because 或 as a result。

例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it helps release stress from work or studies and creates a positive atmosphere during social gatherings.

提案: 回答需更清楚地表述喜欢别人唱歌的原因，避免模糊或错误短语（如“listen to honest”“wind”）。用一到两句说明谁的表演吸引你和为什么，同时用合适的形容词如“talented”或“expressive”。

例: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing, especially my best friend because she has a very expressive and pleasant voice. Listening to her helps me relax and lifts my spirits.

提案: 回答需纠正词汇误用（science class -> singing class），并直接说明是否上过课程。若没有，可说明自学方式或与朋友一起练习，句子要简洁并语法正确。

例: No, I haven't taken any singing classes. I usually practice by myself and sometimes sing in sync with my best friend to improve our timing and harmony.

× I'm really into pop music because it makes me win and relax.

✓ I'm really into pop music because it makes me unwind and relax.

原句中用“win”不符合语境，應該使用“unwind”（放松）。這是詞語選擇錯誤，屬於形容詞/副詞或詞彙使用不當。建議記住常見固定搭配：unwind/relax 用於表達放鬆。

× Sometimes I'm we go to KTV and download the singing apps to enjoy with my.

✓ Sometimes we go to KTV and download singing apps to enjoy together.

原句結構混亂：不應該同時有“I'm we”，以及句尾缺少賓語或介詞短語。把主語統一為“we”，去掉多餘的“I'm”，並用“enjoy together”或“enjoy them together”完成句子。

× Not absolutely.

✓ Not really.

回答“Have you ever learnt how to sing?”時，應使用常見否定短語“Not really.”“Not absolutely.”語法上不自然，屬於時態/習慣用語使用不當。建議使用固定搭配“Not really”或“I haven't learned formally.”

× I always sing by myself because melodies are catching so I'm very enjoying it.

✓ I always sing by myself because the melodies are catchy, so I really enjoy it.

“catching”用法不當，應用形容詞“catchy”；“I'm very enjoying it”語法錯誤，正確為“enjoy”或“really enjoy”。屬於動詞+ -ing/形容詞使用錯誤。建議學習常見形容詞和動詞搭配，避免用進行時代替一般現在時表習慣。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

原句為考官提問，語法正確，無需修改。此處不作改動。

× Actually, if having a special occasion, I will sing for my families of my best friend.

✓ Actually, if there is a special occasion, I will sing for my family or my best friend.

原句缺少主語和正確的‘there is’結構，且“families of my best friend”不合邏輯且複數使用錯誤。應用“family”單數或“my best friend”。屬於句子結構與單複數使用問題。建議使用“if there is a special occasion”作為正確的存在句。

× For example, last summer I went to my best friend a wedding and I sung.

✓ For example, last summer I went to my best friend's wedding and I sang.

“went to my best friend a wedding”字序錯誤，應為“went to my best friend's wedding”。“sung”是過去分詞，應用過去式“sang”。屬於過去時和過去分詞誤用以及所有格缺失。建議記住不規則動詞過去式（sing → sang → sung）和所有格用法。

× Yes, of course singing is very great, is very great tour for happy things because it helps us release our stress from studies or works.

✓ Yes, of course. Singing is great and makes people happy because it helps us relieve stress from studying or work.

原句冗長且詞語使用錯誤：重複“very great”，用“tour for happy things”完全不自然；“release our stress from studies or works”搭配不當，應用“relieve stress from studying or work”。屬於形容詞/副詞和詞組搭配錯誤。建議使用簡潔表達如“relieve stress”並注意不可數名詞“work”。

× Do you like listening to others singing?

✓ Do you like listening to others sing?

此題問句更自然的表達是“listen to others sing”或“listening to other people's singing”。兩種結構均可，原句“others singing”語法不錯但略顯僵硬，建議使用更自然的“others sing”。（保留原意，建議改為更地道表達。）

× I think my best friend, she is very attractive.

✓ I think my best friend is very attractive.

原句中主語重複（my best friend, she），屬於代詞使用冗餘錯誤。應刪除重複代詞。建議避免同一從句中重複主語。

× I'm very like it and listen to honest.

✓ I really like it and listen honestly.

“I'm very like it”語法錯誤，正確為“I really like it”。“listen to honest”不合語法，應為“listen honestly”或“listen attentively”。屬於形容詞/副詞使用錯誤和固定搭配混淆。建議學習副詞用法和常見動詞搭配。

× It's a good way to relax and wind.

✓ It's a good way to relax and unwind.

“wind”在此處應為“unwind”（放鬆）。單詞形式錯誤導致句子不自然，屬於句子結構/詞彙選擇錯誤。建議記住常用短語“relax and unwind”。

× Not really to be honest.

✓ Not really, to be honest.

原句“Not really to be honest.”缺少逗號和語序不自然。雖然語法可理解，但更自然的口語應為“Not really, to be honest.”或“I haven't taken any singing classes, to be honest.”建議調整語序或補全句子。

× I haven't taken any science class but I always sing by myself In Sync ups with my best friend.

✓ I haven't taken any singing classes, but I always sing by myself in sync with my best friend.

“science class”錯寫成“singing class”；“any singing classes”複數更自然；“In Sync ups”錯誤，應為“in sync”表示同步。屬於冠詞/詞形及短語使用錯誤。建議注意單詞拼寫並使用常見短語“in sync”。