Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I do uh, uh, I am highly has favorite, uh, in singing and music. Uh, when I have a free time, I often, uh, sing, uh, the song that I like, uh.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Umm, no, I had no experience on it. Uh, I just uh, singing uh, the song with the middle, the melody uh, is like uh, the singer, uh, in who has this song.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
Actually, I want to have an opportunity to sing, to sing with my idol, uh, certain MTP, uh, because, uh, he not only handsome, uh, but also he has a strong, uh, voice.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes, I do uh, yes, it just has to uh, because uh, singing, uh, is the way uh can explore uh, the feeling of people uh is on is also, uh, help people to release the negative affiliate.
試験官
Do you like listening to others singing?
受験者
Yes, I do umm, I think, uh, listening to all the singing, uh, is uh, the time that I can share favorite with other uh, we can also talk about uh, the song or the singer, uh, that.
試験官
Have you ever taken a singing class?
受験者
Uh, no, I don't because, uh, because of my working, my hard working and studying, uh, so that I have no time to do it, to do it. Uh, but I often, uh, use social media such as, uh, YouTube, uh, for.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 48.0提案: Cải thiện: Nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và có cấu trúc. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes, I do hoặc No, I don't), rồi cho 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh tiếng ờ/ừ lặp lại và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ “I am highly has favorite” không đúng). Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "passionate about" hoặc "enjoy". Ví dụ cụ thể: loại nhạc bạn thích hoặc hoạt động liên quan khi rảnh (hát karaoke, hát online).
例: Yes, I do. I am passionate about singing and music. In my free time I often sing my favorite pop songs at home or when I go to karaoke with friends.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 45.0提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn và rõ ràng. Không dùng cấu trúc lỗi như “I had no experience on it”; nên nói “I have no formal training” hoặc “I haven't taken lessons”. Mô tả cụ thể cách bạn học (nghe theo giai điệu, bắt chước idol, xem video hướng dẫn).
例: No, I haven’t had any formal singing lessons. I usually learn songs by listening carefully to the melody and trying to imitate the singer, sometimes following tutorials on YouTube.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 52.0提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời chính xác người bạn muốn hát cùng và nêu lý do cụ thể, tránh mô tả không liên quan như vẻ ngoài (“handsome”). Dùng linking words để mạch lạc (for example, because, and). Cụ thể hơn về lý do: phong cách, giọng hát, ảnh hưởng đến bạn ra sao.
例: I would love to sing with my idol, Sơn Tùng M-TP, because he has a powerful voice and unique style that inspires me. Singing with him would be a dream because I admire his musical creativity.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng bằng lý do cụ thể. Tránh cấu trúc lặp và từ sai (ví dụ “negative affiliate”). Nên đưa ví dụ thực tế (hát để thư giãn, hát trong lễ hội) và dùng linking words như “because” hoặc “for example”.
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express emotions and relieve stress. For example, I feel much better after singing when I am stressed.
Do you like listening to others singing?
スコア: 49.0提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời thẳng rồi mở rộng bằng chi tiết cụ thể: bạn thích nghe ai, ở đâu, và tại sao. Tránh phát ngôn mơ hồ như “listening to all the singing”; dùng từ chính xác như “other people’s singing” hoặc “live performances”.
例: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing because it lets me discover new songs and discuss music with friends. I especially like watching live performances online or at small gigs.
Have you ever taken a singing class?
スコア: 47.0提案: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng và liệt kê lý do ngắn gọn, hợp lý. Thay "I don't" bằng "I haven't" nếu nói về kinh nghiệm trong quá khứ. Nêu rõ bạn tự học qua nền tảng nào và cách học cụ thể (video hướng dẫn, bài tập thở). Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp như "because of my work and studies".
例: No, I haven’t taken formal singing classes because I am busy with work and studies. However, I often learn from YouTube tutorials, practising breathing exercises and following vocal warm-ups I find online.
文法
× I am highly has favorite, uh, in singing and music.
✓ I really like singing and music.
The original sentence mixes words incorrectly: 'highly has favorite' is ungrammatical. Use an adverb + verb phrase to express preference. 'I really like' is natural and correct. Avoid redundant verbs like 'has' here. Suggestion: Use 'I really like' or 'I am a big fan of'. Use simple adjective/adverb structures.
× when I have a free time, I often, uh, sing, uh, the song that I like, uh.
✓ When I have free time, I often sing songs that I like.
Use 'free time' without the indefinite article 'a'. Also pluralizing 'song' to 'songs' is more natural when speaking generally. Remove filler words and extra commas. Suggestion: Say 'When I have free time, I often sing songs I like.'
× Umm, no, I had no experience on it.
✓ Umm, no, I have no experience with it.
For present state, use present perfect 'have no experience' not past 'had no experience'. Also use preposition 'with' rather than 'on'. Suggestion: Use 'I have no experience with it' to indicate lack of experience up to now.
× Uh, I just uh, singing uh, the song with the middle, the melody uh, is like uh, the singer, uh, in who has this song.
✓ I just sing songs following the melody like the original singer.
Use base verb 'sing' after 'I just' (not 'singing'). The phrase 'the middle, the melody' is unclear; 'following the melody' conveys the meaning. 'In who has this song' is incorrect; use 'the original singer'. Suggestion: Keep sentence simple: 'I just sing songs following the melody like the original singer.'
× Who do you want to sing for?
✓ Who do you want to sing with?
The examiner's question likely intended 'sing with' not 'sing for' given student's answer. 'Sing for' means perform to someone; if student wants to join idol, 'sing with my idol' is correct. Use 'with' to indicate togetherness. Suggestion: Use 'Who do you want to sing with?'} ,{
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