Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然，但表达不够准确，"controlling my tongues"不符合英语习惯，应改为"controlling my tongue"或更合适的表达。此外，回答中缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: To be honest, I don't like singing because I have difficulty controlling my tongue and often forget the lyrics. Therefore, I don't feel confident when I sing.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但表达有语法错误，如"which often rooted"应为"which is often rooted"。另外，"maybe one day I can have the chance"表达不够自然，建议改为"maybe one day I will have the chance"。建议注意语法时态和句子结构的准确性。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have the talent, which is often rooted in my genes. However, maybe one day I will have the chance to learn.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，存在语法和词汇错误，如"sports com competition"不明确，"Chinese got got the champion"重复且不正确。建议简化表达，使用准确的词汇，并补充具体细节，使回答更连贯。

例: If I have to sing, I would sing for my homeland, China, because it reminds me of important events like sports competitions. When I see Chinese athletes winning championships, I feel very proud and inspired.

提案: 回答中多处词汇错误，如"sitting"应为"singing"，"transported"用法不当，且表达不够连贯。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并用连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富内容。

例: Yes, of course. I think singing is a natural way for many people to express their emotions when they feel happy. Moreover, singing can spread happiness to others and create a joyful atmosphere.

× I'm terrible with controlling my tongues and I literally cannot remember the lyrics.

✓ I'm terrible at controlling my tongue and I literally cannot remember the lyrics.

这里应该用介词短语'terrible at'，而不是'terrible with'。另外，'tongues'应为单数'tongue'，因为这里指的是自己的舌头。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语的过去分词形式，'learned'是美式英语。根据上下文选择统一用法。这里建议使用美式英语'learned'。

× No, actually I don't think I have the talent which often rooted in my genes.

✓ No, actually I don't think I have the talent which often roots in my genes.

定语从句中谓语动词应与先行词'talent'保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式'roots'。

× So maybe one day I can have the chance to learn to sing.

✓ So maybe one day I will have the chance to learn to sing.

表达将来可能发生的事情时，使用一般将来时'wil have'更合适，'can have'不符合语法习惯。

× Umm if I have to sing, maybe I'll sing for my homeland, my China, because it reminds me of some sceneries like some sports com competition.

✓ Umm if I have to sing, maybe I'll sing for my homeland, my China, because it reminds me of some scenes like sports competitions.

'sceneries'用法不当，应该用'scenes'表示场景；'sports com competition'表达不清，应改为'sports competitions'。

× When I see umm Chinese got got the champion, I usually feel very proud and make me want.

✓ When I see Chinese people win the championship, I usually feel very proud and it makes me want to sing.

'Chinese'作为名词时应加复数形式'Chinese people'；'got got the champion'重复且用法错误，应改为'win the championship'；句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× Yes, of course. I think sitting for many people is a natural emotional expression when I feel very happy.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing for many people is a natural emotional expression when I feel very happy.

'sitting'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× And of course, happiness can be transported to other people by the way of sailing.

✓ And of course, happiness can be transmitted to other people by the way of singing.

'sailing'（航海）用错，应为'singing'（唱歌），且动词'transmitted'比'transported'更合适表达情感传递。