Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且表达了原因，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and brings me happiness and relaxation.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“have haven't”和“sing classes”。建议注意语法正确性，并使用完整句子表达。

例: No, I haven't taken any formal singing classes. I usually learn by listening to music and singing along with the singers.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议练习正确使用时态和表达感谢的句型，保持句子简洁。

例: I would like to sing for my son because he always appreciates and thanks me. He claps whenever I sing, which makes me very happy.

提案: 回答内容丰富且表达清晰，但部分句子连接略显生硬。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, absolutely. Songs with lively rhythms can bring happiness and relaxation to people. Moreover, singing is a great way to pass the time and take our minds off daily stress.

× I have haven't attended any formal sing classes.

✓ I haven't attended any formal singing classes.

这里使用了错误的助动词组合“have haven't”，应使用“haven't”表示否定的现在完成时。并且“sing classes”应改为“singing classes”，因为“singing”作为动名词修饰“classes”。

× Just listen to the musics and and sing along the singers.

✓ Just listen to music and sing along with the singers.

“musics”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式，应使用“music”。另外，“sing along the singers”缺少介词，应为“sing along with the singers”。

× he always shows his appreciate and thanks for to me

✓ he always shows his appreciation and thanks to me

“appreciate”是动词，名词形式应为“appreciation”。“thanks for to me”结构错误，应为“thanks to me”。

× he always clapping when I was seeing.

✓ he was always clapping when I was singing.

“clapping”需要与过去进行时连用，且“seeing”应为“singing”，符合语境。

× I am really appreciate that.

✓ I really appreciate that.

“appreciate”是动词，前面不需要“am”，应直接使用“I really appreciate that”。

× take our minds of daily stress.

✓ take our minds off daily stress.

固定搭配是“take one's mind off something”，表示转移注意力，不能用“of”。