Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I love singing. When I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a singing star, so I practiced every day. My passion for singing is also inspired by my mother, who enjoys singing a lot.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“forgive”用词错误。建议使用正确的词汇表达时间距离和遗忘的意思，并且使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have. When I was about five years old, I joined a singing group and learned some basic skills. However, it was a long time ago, so I have forgotten most of what I learned.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构略显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且丰富细节。

例: I want to sing for myself because I haven't had many opportunities to express my feelings through singing. It helps me communicate my emotions and feel more confident.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，“bolt of memory”用词不当。建议使用更恰当的比喻和表达，增强逻辑性和连贯性。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. Music often reminds people of special moments from the past, which can evoke warm feelings and joyful memories.

× Absolutely. I when I was a kid, I wanted to be a singing star, so I practiced my singing skills every day.

✓ Absolutely. When I was a kid, I wanted to be a singing star, so I practiced my singing skills every day.

句子中“I when I was a kid”结构混乱，存在多余的“I”，应删除以使句子结构正确。

× But it is so far from now so I forgive.

✓ But it was so long ago that I forgot.

句中“it is so far from now”时态不正确，应使用过去时“was”，且“forgive”用词错误，应为“forgot”表示忘记。

× I don't have any chances to show and express myself by singing.

✓ I don't have any chance to show and express myself by singing.

“chance”在此处为不可数名词，不能用复数形式“chances”，应改为单数“chance”。

× When you hear some songs or music you hear you have heard in the past, you will remember some special feeling and memory.

✓ When you hear some songs or music you have heard in the past, you will remember some special feelings and memories.

句中“you hear you have heard”重复且结构错误，应删除多余部分；“feeling”和“memory”应使用复数形式“feelings”和“memories”以匹配上下文。