Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和冗余，表达时要简洁明了。

例: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it and it makes me feel less confident.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，建议练习句子结构，使用连贯的句子表达经历和观点。

例: Yes, I took singing classes in primary school, but I realized that singing requires talent, so I didn't continue.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达方式。

例: I would like to sing for my close friends because I can enjoy it without worrying about singing well.

提案: 回答中有过多的语气词，句子结构不完整，建议减少口头语，使用完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness, especially when I am in a bad mood. Listening to music or singing with friends helps me relax and feel better.

× No, I don't like singing because I don't have seen skills and I sing very don't well and this activity maybe makes me lose confidence.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I haven't seen skills and I don't sing very well and this activity maybe makes me lose confidence.

这里的错误是动词时态和形式使用错误。'don't have seen' 应该用现在完成时的否定形式 'haven't seen'，表示到目前为止没有见过相关技能。'don't sing very don't well' 中 'don't' 用错了，应该是 'don't sing very well'。建议学习现在完成时的用法和副词的位置。

× Yes to be honest in primary school I learn I went to some class to study how to sing but don't didn't have any roles for me.

✓ Yes, to be honest, in primary school I learned and I went to some classes to study how to sing but they didn't have any roles for me.

这里 'learn' 应该用过去式 'learned'，因为描述的是过去的事情。'don't didn't' 是错误的双重否定，应改为 'didn't'。'class' 应该用复数 'classes'，因为通常是多节课。建议注意动词过去式和否定形式的正确使用。

× So since then is I think thing will need talent.

✓ So since then, I think singing needs talent.

句子结构混乱，'is I think thing will need talent' 不符合英语语法。应简化为 'I think singing needs talent'，表达清晰。建议学习简单句的结构和主谓一致。

× I want to sing for very close friends because just just happy don't need to care about how to sing a song and sounds good.

✓ I want to sing for my very close friends because I just want to be happy and don't need to care about how to sing a song and sound good.

'just just happy' 重复且缺少主语，'don't need to care' 缺少主语，'sounds good' 主语不明确。应加上主语 'I'，并调整句子使其通顺。建议注意量词和主语的使用。

× Uh, yes, uh, especially, uh, when I'm in a bad mood and listen to some music can reduce my pressure and increase happiness.

✓ Uh, yes, especially when I'm in a bad mood, listening to some music can reduce my stress and increase my happiness.

'listen to some music can reduce' 缺少主语，应该用动名词 'listening' 作为主语。'pressure' 用词不当，改为 'stress' 更合适。建议学习动名词作主语的用法和词汇搭配。

× Uh, and especially when with friends, uh, listen music alone singing.

✓ Uh, and especially when I'm with friends, listening to music and singing alone.

句子缺少主语 'I'm'，'listen music' 应为 'listening to music'，'alone singing' 结构不正确，应调整为 'listening to music and singing alone'。建议注意连词后句子完整性和动词形式。