Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too brief and does not address the question. You should directly state whether you like singing and explain why, using complete sentences and providing some reasons or feelings.

例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more details about your learning experience and using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. In fact, I have tried many times by taking lessons and practising regularly to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and complete. Try to use a full sentence and explain your reason briefly.

例: I usually sing just for myself because it helps me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and lacks elaboration. Try to avoid repeating phrases and provide reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it allows them to express their feelings, although it might not have the same effect on everyone.

× No one just for me.

✓ No one, just for me.

The original sentence lacks a necessary comma to separate the two ideas, which causes confusion. Adding a comma clarifies that the student means they want to sing for no one else but themselves. This improves sentence clarity and structure.