Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免无意义的词汇。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and enjoy time with my friends, especially after exams.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明原因，避免重复和不连贯的句子。

例: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally because it requires a lot of time, and I usually just sing casually with friends.

提案: 回答较为清楚，但语法有小错误，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my mother because she works hard and singing might help her relax.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议使用正确的词汇和句式，表达观点时更连贯具体。

例: Definitely, I believe singing is a good way for people to feel happy. It helps express emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel uplifted after singing their favorite songs.

× Definitely, I like seeing KTVB 'cause it is place for me to cuddle with my friends and relax ourselves.

✓ Definitely, I like going to KTVB 'cause it is a place for me to cuddle with my friends and relax ourselves.

这里'seeing'用错了，应该用'going to'表示去KTVB这个地方；另外，'it is place'缺少冠词'a'。

× You really I want to the. Uh, after my exam.

✓ I really want to go there after my exam.

原句结构混乱，缺少动词和完整表达，需调整为完整句子。

× To be honest, I haven't learned how to sing because I usually see in person or with some friends.

✓ To be honest, I haven't learned how to sing because I usually sing in person or with some friends.

'see in person'用词错误，应为'sing in person'，表示亲自唱歌。

× I don't want to learn it professionally becauses it is a it is demanding time for me.

✓ I don't want to learn it professionally because it is a demanding time for me.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'；句中重复'it is'需删除多余部分。

× Maybe my mother because she is very tired and had has lots of work to do and I want to sing a song to her to relax her.

✓ Maybe my mother because she is very tired and has lots of work to do and I want to sing a song to her to help her relax.

'had has'时态混用，应使用现在时'has'；'to relax her'表达不准确，改为'to help her relax'更自然。

× Definitely, I believe saying it's a good way for people to happy to be happy.

✓ Definitely, I believe singing is a good way for people to be happy.

'saying'应为'singing'；'to happy to be happy'结构错误，应为'to be happy'。

× Singing allows people to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve strikes.

✓ Singing allows people to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

'relieve strikes'用词错误，应为'relieve stress'，表示缓解压力。

× For example, many people feel positive and uplifted after seeing their favorite songs.

✓ For example, many people feel positive and uplifted after singing their favorite songs.

'seeing their favorite songs'用词错误，应为'singing their favorite songs'，表示唱自己喜欢的歌。