Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Та илүү тодорхой, логик холбоос үг ашиглан, илүү цэвэрхэн, алдаагүй өгүүлбэрээр хариултаа илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my anxiety. When I sing, I feel much better than before."

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my anxiety. When I sing, I feel much better than before.

提案: Хариултаа илүү цэгцтэй, алдаагүй өгүүлбэрээр илэрхийлж, холбоос үг ашиглан логик дараалал үүсгээрэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I have never learned how to sing formally. However, when I was little, I used to sing along with my sisters who listened to many songs."

例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. However, when I was little, I used to sing along with my sisters who listened to many songs.

提案: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, алдаагүй, логик холбоос үг ашиглан илэрхийлж, үгсийн алдааг засах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I want to sing for my boyfriend because it makes me feel happy and connected to him. Singing together would be a special way to express my feelings and create memorable moments."

例: I want to sing for my boyfriend because it makes me feel happy and connected to him. Singing together would be a special way to express my feelings and create memorable moments.

提案: Хариултаа илүү цэгцтэй, алдаагүй өгүүлбэрээр илэрхийлж, логик холбоос үг ашиглан илүү тодорхой болгоорой. Жишээ нь, "Yes, definitely. I have never seen a sad person while singing because singing usually brings joy and happiness."

例: Yes, definitely. I have never seen a sad person while singing because singing usually brings joy and happiness.

× I don't know, when I singing I feel better than before.

✓ I don't know, when I sing I feel better than before.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here; after 'when I', the base form 'sing' should be used to indicate habitual action. Using 'singing' (present participle) is incorrect in this context.

× No, I never learned how to singing but.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing.

After 'learned how to', the base form of the verb 'sing' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'singing'. The phrase 'but' is unnecessary and incomplete here.

× I was really little.

✓ I was really little then.

The sentence is incomplete in context; adding 'then' clarifies the time reference. However, this is a minor issue and can be acceptable as is.

× My sisters listen so many songs and.

✓ My sisters listen to so many songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, the sentence is incomplete with 'and' at the end.

× I'm there. With them and I'm just singing with them.

✓ I'm there with them, and I'm just singing with them.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the two parts with a comma and conjunction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I want to sing for my boyfriend because it makes me feel happy and connected to him.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because it makes me feel happy and connected to him.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no quantifier issues detected.

× I would love to sing momento song it at correct key.

✓ I would love to sing a memorable song at the correct key.

The phrase 'momento song it at correct key' is incorrect and unclear. 'Momento' should be 'memorable', and the article 'a' is needed before 'memorable song'. Also, 'at the correct key' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Bar with him because it would be a fun and memorable expn.

✓ Sing with him because it would be a fun and memorable experience.

The word 'Bar' is likely a typo for 'Sing'. 'Expn' is an incomplete word and should be 'experience'. The sentence needs to be complete and clear.

× Yes, definitely yes, because I I never seen.

✓ Yes, definitely yes, because I have never seen.

The present perfect tense 'have never seen' is required here to indicate experience up to now. 'I never seen' is incorrect.

× I'm sad people when they are singing.

✓ I don't see sad people when they are singing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that the speaker does not see sad people when they sing. 'I'm sad people' is incorrect.

× I'm never seen a sad person when they are seeing it.

✓ I've never seen a sad person when they are singing.

The present perfect 'I've never seen' is correct for experience. 'I'm never seen' is incorrect. Also, 'seeing it' should be 'singing' to match context.