Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有多处发音和用词错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，“crack”应为“karaoke”，“seeing our favorite sounds”应为“singing our favorite songs”。建议注意单词拼写和发音，避免影响表达的清晰度。回答内容较丰富，但表达不够自然流畅。

例: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress after a long day. I often go to karaoke with my friends, and we have a lot of fun singing our favorite songs together. Singing not only lifts my mood but also brings us closer.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和词汇错误，如“learn”应为“learned”，“say”应为“sing”，“I just took”不完整且不清楚。建议加强语法基础，注意句子完整性和用词准确性。

例: No, actually I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually just sing by myself and follow my own style because singing is more a way for me to relax rather than a skill. However, I would like to develop it professionally in the future.

提案: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在重复词汇“allows allows”，以及“saying”应为“singing”。建议注意发音和拼写，避免重复，同时可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to sing just for myself because I'm quite introverted and feel shy singing in front of others. Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy life more, as it allows me to express my feelings without any pressure.

提案: 回答中“saying”应为“singing”，“resonated”时态不一致，应为“resonate”。“at Those songs”表达不清楚。建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，避免模糊表达。

例: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people because music often expresses deep emotions that really resonate with listeners. For example, some songs are very touching and can uplift people's moods, making them feel emotionally connected and joyful.

× Yes, I really like saying because it helps me relieve stress after a long day.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress after a long day.

动词 'like' 后面应该接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里 'saying' 应改为 'singing'。

× I often go to crack with my friends and we have a lot of fun seeing our favorite sounds together.

✓ I often go to karaoke with my friends and we have a lot of fun singing our favorite songs together.

'go to crack' 是错误表达，正确应为 'go to karaoke'，表示去卡拉OK。'seeing our favorite sounds' 也不合适，应为 'singing our favorite songs'。

× Saying not only lived out my mood but also brings us close together.

✓ Singing not only lifts my mood but also brings us closer together.

'Saying' 应为 'Singing'。'lived out my mood' 语法和表达错误，应为 'lifts my mood'。

× No, actually I have never formally learn how to say.

✓ No, actually I have never formally learned how to sing.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn' 应改为 'learned'。'say' 应为 'sing'。

× I just took.

✓ I just took lessons.

句子不完整，'took' 后应有宾语，补充 'lessons' 使句子完整。

× I usually just the same by myself, you know, and follow my face.

✓ I usually just sing by myself, you know, and follow my pace.

'the same' 应为 'sing'，'face' 应为 'pace'，表示节奏。

× Because saying is more like a way for me to relax rather than skill.

✓ Because singing is more like a way for me to relax rather than a skill.

'saying' 应为 'singing'，'rather than skill' 前应加冠词 'a'。

× I want to develop professionally.

✓ I want to develop professionally.

句子无语法错误，无需修改。

× I prefer to sing just for myself because I'm quite introverted and I feel shy singing in front of others.

✓ I prefer to sing just for myself because I'm quite introverted and I feel shy singing in front of others.

句子无语法错误，无需修改。

× Saying alone helps me relax and enjoying life more as it allows allows me to express my feelings without any pressure.

✓ Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy life more as it allows me to express my feelings without any pressure.

'enjoying' 应改为动词原形 'enjoy'，因为前面是并列结构。重复的 'allows' 应去掉一个。

× Yes, definitely. Saying can bring happiness to people because music often expresses deep emotions that really resonated with listeners.

✓ Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people because music often expresses deep emotions that really resonate with listeners.

'Saying' 应为 'Singing'。'resonated' 应为现在时 'resonate'，与前文时态保持一致。

× For example, at Those songs are very touching and can uplift people's mood, making them feel emotionally connected and joyful.

✓ For example, those songs are very touching and can uplift people's mood, making them feel emotionally connected and joyful.

'at Those' 结构错误，应去掉 'at'。